Pixel Joint Forum: A Sunset Life

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   This is a Pixel Scene of a Sunset in which a Girl is walking in a watery area with a Pitcher on her head and an animal beside.

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Aastikya Midshipman Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86	Topic: A Sunset Life Posted: 11 January 2012 at 6:48am
	This is a Pixel Scene of a Sunset in which a Girl is walking in a watery area with a Pitcher on her head and an animal beside. Comments and Critiques Welcomed!
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Manupix Commander Joined: 05 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 11 January 2012 at 10:36am
	Needs much, much brighter highlights! Also the sun is far bigger than real-life, considering the angle of view more or less implied by the foreground. I just posted this in another thread, might as well post it again ;)
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Aastikya Midshipman Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86	Posted: 14 January 2012 at 9:42am
	Any more comments?
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Aastikya Midshipman Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86	Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:40am
	Edited some stuff.
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Zeratanus Commander Joined: 03 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 576	Posted: 21 January 2012 at 9:28am
	Well, you essentially did nothing about anything manupix said, but the palm tree does look a lot better at least also, may be harder with this palette, but a strong directional light will create stronger, darker, longer shadows. I also cant see any break between the sand and water, or if theres water covering the whole area.
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