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Atynine
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Topic: Critque my first Pixel art?
Posted: 23 March 2012 at 12:59pm

Thanks in advance

Edited by Atynine - 23 March 2012 at 2:37pm

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jambox_josh
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:04pm

image shack is decent enough

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Atynine
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:05pm

It's not loading for me, but oh well.

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Partack
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:43pm

sod all that.

use http://imgur.com/

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reis
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:08pm

Error on the image

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Atynine
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:28pm

Added a direct link, in case the image doesn't work(It didn't work for 3 different sites)

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Partack
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:30pm

imgur worked.

use [ img] http://i.imgur.com/SCAn2.png [ /img] (without spaces) to show your works directly.

I like the eyeball especially. the dithering on the rest of it makes it look a little flat though, maybe you'll want to consider using your darker shade to only show deep rounded parts?

nice and clean lineart though.

I suggest maybe making your eyeball shinier by removing some of the dithering, keping it the whitish gray and using a white square/circle ( if you can manage one) to convey a speck of light and make it look shiny/glassy.

Anyway. good job.

Edited by Partack - 23 March 2012 at 2:35pm

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Atynine
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Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:36pm

Thanks. I noticed it looked kinda flat once I finished, I'll re-do the shading in a few minutes to fix it.

Also, I posted the image the way you suggested, but it didn't work.

Edit: I guess I can't do [IMG ]?

Edited by Atynine - 23 March 2012 at 2:37pm

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Atynine
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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:04am

Is this any better?(At not being as flat) It is in my eye.
pictures:L

Edited by Atynine - 24 March 2012 at 6:05am

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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:39am

imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tags
Just copy/paste it.

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Atynine
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Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:04am

Originally posted by Jeremy

imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tagsJust copy/paste it.

Oh wow I'm stupid... Thanks:P

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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: Critque my first Pixel art? Posted: 23 March 2012 at 12:59pm
	Thanks in advance Edited by Atynine - 23 March 2012 at 2:37pm
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jambox_josh Midshipman Joined: 12 May 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 78	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:04pm
	image shack is decent enough
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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:05pm
	It's not loading for me, but oh well.
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Partack Commander Joined: 20 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 260	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 1:43pm
	sod all that. use http://imgur.com/
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reis Commander Joined: 13 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 118	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:08pm
	Error on the image
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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:28pm
	Added a direct link, in case the image doesn't work(It didn't work for 3 different sites)
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Partack Commander Joined: 20 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 260	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:30pm
	imgur worked. use [ img] http://i.imgur.com/SCAn2.png [ /img] (without spaces) to show your works directly. I like the eyeball especially. the dithering on the rest of it makes it look a little flat though, maybe you'll want to consider using your darker shade to only show deep rounded parts? nice and clean lineart though. I suggest maybe making your eyeball shinier by removing some of the dithering, keping it the whitish gray and using a white square/circle ( if you can manage one) to convey a speck of light and make it look shiny/glassy. Anyway. good job. Edited by Partack - 23 March 2012 at 2:35pm
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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 23 March 2012 at 2:36pm
	Thanks. I noticed it looked kinda flat once I finished, I'll re-do the shading in a few minutes to fix it. Also, I posted the image the way you suggested, but it didn't work. Edit: I guess I can't do [IMG ]? Edited by Atynine - 23 March 2012 at 2:37pm
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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:04am
	Is this any better?(At not being as flat) It is in my eye. pictures:L Edited by Atynine - 24 March 2012 at 6:05am
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jeremy Rear Admiral Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704	Posted: 24 March 2012 at 4:39am
	imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tags Just copy/paste it.
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Atynine Seaman Joined: 23 March 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 24 March 2012 at 6:04am
	*Originally posted by Jeremy* imgur gives the option of clicking ready-made IMG tagsJust copy/paste it. Oh wow I'm stupid... Thanks:P
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