Pixel Joint Forum: Spaceship (W.I.P.)

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   Hello guys,

I am making a spaceship as a second test for myself.
Please tell me what you think of it and how I can improve it.

I am using Gimp 2.8 to make it.
As you can see it has a lot of gradients, but they are al handmade by myself and not using the gradient tool.

Also, I am kind of stuck with designing the lower middle part. If any has suggestions, please tell.

Spaceship (W.I.P.):

Thanks,
Mark

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DijkeMark Seaman Joined: 27 April 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Spaceship (W.I.P.) Posted: 20 May 2012 at 6:25am
	Hello guys, I am making a spaceship as a second test for myself. Please tell me what you think of it and how I can improve it. I am using Gimp 2.8 to make it. As you can see it has a lot of gradients, but they are al handmade by myself and not using the gradient tool. Also, I am kind of stuck with designing the lower middle part. If any has suggestions, please tell. Spaceship (W.I.P.): Thanks, Mark
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yaomon17 Commander Joined: 07 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 20 May 2012 at 9:12pm
	Hello. I notice you have a lot of gradients going on which is very counter-intuitive despite many popular beliefs. You first want to work on the overall design and design the ship in parts such as the engine/turrets/cockpit etc. If you want this to look realistic, make sure these parts are designed to at least look like they have a practical function. Block out basic shapes and try not to use too many colours. EDIT: Quick sketch of what I'm talking about. Edited by yaomon17 - 22 May 2012 at 5:19pm
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