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Quote black_darkness Replybullet Topic: 16x16 tileset feedback
    Posted: 18 December 2012 at 5:28pm
Hello. I am looking for some feedback on my tile-set. The palette it on the right I am using 16 different gray colors. Also the blue is the transparency color. And red is used to separate 16 by 16 tiles for convenience of editing. The tile-sheet is on the left. There is grass, ground, hero with 2 animations, log, long_grass, and tree.



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Quote black_darkness Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2012 at 5:38pm
It seems like my image is fuzzy. Where is a good place to host picel art?
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Quote monotov Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2012 at 7:02pm
Try tinypic or imgur. 
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Quote black_darkness Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2012 at 9:12pm
I tried both they are both fuzzy.


EDIT* Nevermind. I tried downloading it and it wasnt fuzzy. It is just the zoom function on the forum images.


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Quote black_darkness Replybullet Posted: 21 December 2012 at 1:28am
Here is an update.What do you guys think? I am using this in a game I am making right now.



Here is the tilesheet



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Quote black_darkness Replybullet Posted: 23 December 2012 at 4:32am
Still no0thing?

anyways here's another update. I added color.



Here is an example of the menu. (Drawn pixel by pixel)


Another screenshot. (I cant get the trees to look right.




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Quote 1337B337 Replybullet Posted: 29 December 2012 at 9:38am
Really nice, it has an Earthbound/Pokemon feel to it.

The only thing I'd say is make sure all the sprite pieces achieve the same level of detail, right now the cabbage (?) in the last two pictures look to crisp compared to everything else.
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Quote ultimaodin Replybullet Posted: 30 December 2012 at 7:42pm
First thing i think you need to decide on is the light source. As this isn't overly apparent on any of the tiles.

You also have clashing styles. If your going to use black outlines on somethings, you kind of want to use them on all things.

Also, when mapping try not to make things so large unless you plan on filling them with sprites. Believe it or not, but walking around in huge open areas is not generally that thrilling when it comes to pixelart games.

One of the biggest issue is that all your tiles lack contrast.
The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey.
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