Pixel Joint Forum: (Beginner) Egoraptor

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   Hey!

I just joined a few minutes ago, and was looking for some feedback on this Egoraptor sprite I've been working on. 

I know it's not perfect, and if anyone could help improve it I'd really appreciate it.

I've been trying to just stick with base colors and shadows to go with the cartoony style.

Thanks!

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TheSchaeff Seaman Joined: 14 January 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: (Beginner) Egoraptor Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:29pm
	Hey! I just joined a few minutes ago, and was looking for some feedback on this Egoraptor sprite I've been working on. I know it's not perfect, and if anyone could help improve it I'd really appreciate it. I've been trying to just stick with base colors and shadows to go with the cartoony style. Thanks!
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Velrio Midshipman Joined: 14 January 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 14 January 2014 at 2:53pm
	I can't offer much in the way of advice, but hey, it made me laugh some.
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skittle Commander Joined: 20 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 350	Posted: 15 January 2014 at 7:54am
	Hey, one thing I noticed is that the shading on his face is a bit funky (and in a weird way :P). The shadow should be at the left side of his face not his right. There should only be a little bit of shadow that the hair casts on the right, just not a load of it. Edited by ADrawingMan - 15 January 2014 at 2:20pm
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TheSchaeff Seaman Joined: 14 January 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 15 January 2014 at 10:33am
	Now that you mentioned it ADrawingMan, there is a lot of shadow on the right. Will fix when I get the chance, thanks!
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 16 January 2014 at 12:03am
	to be honest, if you're going to mimic these cartoon-esque versions they use on their intros, you dont need shading at all.
	I ate leel's babies
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