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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Topic: Vader WIP
    Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:44pm

hey guys, tell me what you think about my rough vader sketch:

also, can some1 help with the neck? there is supposed to be a chain there, but it looks like a rope, so any help with that would also be apreciated. Thx!

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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:57pm
the whole thing looks quite squished in.
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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:13pm

What do you mean by "squished in?" do you mean it is to long, like... like this:

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sry its hard to explain but like what do you mean?

 

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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:14pm

I think he means that it's too tall and not wide enough, at least that's what it looks like to me

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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:27pm

does this seem less squished?

i shortened the neck and took out the shoulders.

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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:29pm
I mean the whole thing still looks too thin..try widening the face and making everything wider.    <--(vader)-->
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:38pm
thats cuz he didnt crop the helmet vertically

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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:33pm

that actually isn't the picture i got it from. i always draw cartoon vaders so my pictures are where i got the sketch from

Edit: is this any less long and squished?



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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:53pm

The eyes are far to high then

 

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 08 February 2006 at 11:24pm
the mouth triangle ios too big.
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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Posted: 09 February 2006 at 5:50am

here is an update. tell me what you think.

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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 09 February 2006 at 9:39am
Much better. The eyes are rounded not triangles, but i bet you were aware of that, anyways if the eyes wererounded it would add depth. Just round the tops and keep the bottttttttom flat.
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Quote {TGH}Jedi-Sam Replybullet Posted: 09 February 2006 at 2:18pm
sweet. is the helmet too big tho? it kinda looks a bit big but im not sure
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