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    Posted: 02 August 2017 at 6:08pm


This is my very first gif, im pretty new to pixel art so im working with few colors, what do you think guys about this slime??, some advice would be cool!

~Thanks for your time~
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Quote Yuran Replybullet Posted: 03 August 2017 at 12:47pm
Extraordinary slaim, What does he do? Does he want to eat somebody? :)
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Quote kerv01 Replybullet Posted: 03 August 2017 at 9:35pm
Hi Yuran! thanks, jajaj, mm it is more like going to do something :P (like in ready stance), just there happy of life xD.
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Quote kerv01 Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2017 at 3:24pm

Ok now i have done this, what you guys think about it?, it is just supposed to jump :P, advices would be great about it, thanks!.

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Quote eishiya Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2017 at 4:00pm
I think it's strange for a slime to be shedding parts of its body like that, especially with no apparent sign of those bits coming back into the body. Looks more like a lifeless droplet of some fluid.
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Quote kerv01 Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2017 at 4:56pm


i added two frames how it looks like now? >_ou... :x
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Quote Yuran Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2017 at 8:57pm
I advise you to add more frames where the animation of the slime is too sharp :)
For example, add frames where the slam wakes its round shape. (my english bad too)
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Quote kerv01 Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2017 at 10:29pm

How about now? o.o
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Quote Yuran Replybullet Posted: 07 August 2017 at 2:34am
So, I corrected the jerky frames and timings of your work. Look what I changed, but do not copy my actions. Try to find for yourself mistakes and roughness in the animation, do not be lazy to study other people's work.
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Quote kerv01 Replybullet Posted: 08 August 2017 at 9:22pm
oh no my intentions are not to copy work, i want to be able to develop my own style, ohh thanks for the advice :D!! your slime looks more real D:!!!
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