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kerv01
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 02 August 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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This is my very first gif, im pretty new to pixel art so im working with few colors, what do you think guys about this slime??, some advice would be cool! ~Thanks for your time~ |
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Yuran
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Extraordinary slaim, What does he do? Does he want to eat somebody? :)
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kerv01
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Hi Yuran! thanks, jajaj, mm it is more like going to do something :P (like in ready stance), just there happy of life xD.
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kerv01
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![]() Ok now i have done this, what you guys think about it?, it is just supposed to jump :P, advices would be great about it, thanks!. P.D.:(sry for bad english) |
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eishiya
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I think it's strange for a slime to be shedding parts of its body like that, especially with no apparent sign of those bits coming back into the body. Looks more like a lifeless droplet of some fluid.
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kerv01
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 02 August 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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![]() i added two frames how it looks like now? >_ou... :x |
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Yuran
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I advise you to add more frames where the animation of the slime is too sharp :)
For example, add frames where the slam wakes its round shape. (my english bad too) |
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kerv01
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![]() How about now? o.o |
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Yuran
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So, I corrected the jerky frames and timings of your work. Look what I changed, but do not copy my actions. Try to find for yourself mistakes and roughness in the animation, do not be lazy to study other people's work.
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kerv01
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oh no my intentions are not to copy work, i want to be able to develop my own style, ohh thanks for the advice :D!! your slime looks more real D:!!!
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