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Leenus
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Quote Leenus Replybullet Topic: Platform Game [WIP]
    Posted: 07 November 2017 at 10:01am


Hi!
This is a school project ive been working on for a while now and id like some feedback and tips on what to do with it.
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Quote NancyGold Replybullet Posted: 07 November 2017 at 11:02am
You can make far leg less contrast, that way walk animation will be easier to read. Currently your robot has very bright arms and legs, while its body is coal-black - is that your intention? I would have made exhaust steam a whole cloud, because it could look noisy in game. Also, palette could be tweaked too.
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Quote Leenus Replybullet Posted: 07 November 2017 at 11:14am
Thanks a lot! Will try your tips
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 07 November 2017 at 11:26am
Is that one foot and one spike? It is incredibly hard to read the spike because the arm behind it has something interesting as well. Perhaps you can alter the design so that these two elements do not overlap.

And is that a backpack? I would think that a backpack would move as a whole, unless it was filled with something really light close to his body and something really heavy in the far end of it.

I think there are many large and small things to do with this, but if you're interested in working on this for a while lets see first where these few ideas get you!
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Quote Leenus Replybullet Posted: 07 November 2017 at 11:45am
Thank you as well for all the helpful tips and suggestions
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