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Quote thales Replybullet Topic: I don't know what I'm doing
    Posted: 17 May 2018 at 4:11pm
I was just going to make a round light, but got carried away... Maybe if I make it more "S" shaped it would improve?

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Quote eriophora Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2018 at 5:32pm
Using a reference photo might be helpful. What stick out most to me are the following:

Your flame is pillow shaded rather than having a progression.

Candles don't really "spark" when burning steadily.

Candle wax doesn't melt like that. Yours currently looks a bit like snow.


Try looking at this photo of a candle.

Here is a quick edit that might give you some ideas.

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