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LiteraryPixels
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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Hey everyone! I've been working on my next piece, which is fanart of the character Simon Snow from the book Carry On, and I think it's ready for critique!
![]() I'm particularly interested in feedback on shading and animation, but if anything else jumps out at you, definitely let me know! (Ignore the stray blue pixel in the corner; just a small oversight.) Thank you for your time. |
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mkd
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 19 May 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 41 |
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I think the animation would be better if we can see how the wings appear (in pain for the character, in a explosion of power, very quickly etc). It has to be more complex, with more expressed details in the character position during the animation. And don't forget anticipation ![]() |
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LiteraryPixels
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
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Thanks so much! That's very helpful feedback, and while I hadn't encountered the concept of anticipation before (this is only my second pixel animation) it makes a ton of sense. I'll see if I can push things further with my next draft.
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mkd
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 19 May 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 41 |
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While you are working on it, you shouldn't do the colors (or just do flat colors) on every frame, until you are happy with the animated skeleton / shadow figure you're doing. EDIT : you can see the process here for example : https://youtu.be/5VkDXBsIXso?t=1m14s
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