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Edgaretto
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Quote Edgaretto Replybullet Topic: WIP BWRY Challenge Feedback
    Posted: 30 January 2020 at 4:28am


Any feedback is apreciated. I'm new at this
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Quote NancyGold Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2020 at 12:02pm
1. The camel anatomy a bit strange. Especially humps. Looks like a mix between a bactrian and a dromedary camels.
2. The yellow sky is out of place, unless you have a sand storm. But if it is indeed sandstorm, vision would be really foggy.
3. Pyramids have some projection problems. Same with the road. They look non-eucldeian. Remember, euclidean projection is linear.
4. The palette hurts eyes. It is both low contrast and bland.

I've edited your art with alternative palette and sky.

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Quote Edgaretto Replybullet Posted: 05 February 2020 at 6:25pm
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