Pixel Joint Forum: Portraits for RPG Campaign

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   I'm doing a series of portraits inspired by Fire Emblem's character portraits about the characters from the No Room for a Wallflower, a published campaign for Lancer RPG.

These are being made as assets for my TTRPG campaign, mostly to be shared with other GM's playing the same adventure. Also it's a good excuse to practice drawing and pixel art.

This is my first one, and it represents the projection of the AI responsible for taking care of Evergreen, a colony still in development on the planet of Hercynia.

Any tips, feedbacks and critiques about technique, color choice, anatomy or the drawing in general are welcome 

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alkyama Seaman Joined: 24 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: Portraits for RPG Campaign Posted: 24 May 2021 at 12:28pm
	I'm doing a series of portraits inspired by Fire Emblem's character portraits about the characters from the No Room for a Wallflower, a published campaign for Lancer RPG. These are being made as assets for my TTRPG campaign, mostly to be shared with other GM's playing the same adventure. Also it's a good excuse to practice drawing and pixel art. This is my first one, and it represents the projection of the AI responsible for taking care of Evergreen, a colony still in development on the planet of Hercynia. Any tips, feedbacks and critiques about technique, color choice, anatomy or the drawing in general are welcome
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Mike9377 Midshipman Joined: 20 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 25 May 2021 at 3:38pm
	It looks good overall. I do think that the white parts in the eye on the right shouldn't be as bright as the left eye. I think the highlight on the philtrum to me looks like it would look more realistic if it was slightly darker.
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alkyama Seaman Joined: 24 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 27 May 2021 at 9:40am
	Thanks Mike! I tried your suggestions and I think it really got better as a result. Also I went for some rim lights as well, because I felt it could make the silhouette a little bit more readable.
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Posted: 29 May 2021 at 6:46pm
	I'm not sure if it have some type of necktie, but if this is the case, need change a little in the knot.
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Mike9377 Midshipman Joined: 20 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 30 May 2021 at 5:40pm
	*Originally posted by alkyama* Thanks Mike! I tried your suggestions and I think it really got better as a result. Also I went for some rim lights as well, because I felt it could make the silhouette a little bit more readable. You're welcome! It looks great!
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alkyama Seaman Joined: 24 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 02 June 2021 at 6:14pm
	Yeah, I wasn't so happy with that necktie, but had no idea how to fix it. Tried to pick some reference images and I think it's a little better now:
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Posted: 03 June 2021 at 6:48am
	Yes, now looks better!.
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