Pixel Joint Forum: Pool Scene

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(143x176, 16 colours)

Going a bit crazy from staring at this for so long. I can't tell if it's anywhere close to ready for the gallery and just needs a bit of cleanup or if it's super messy but it's burned in my retinas so deep I've lost the ability to tell. I would really appreciate any comments or suggestions.

Main concern is the bushes near the edge of the pool that I must have reworked around a thousand times, but the water gets me scratching my head too.

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cancrizans Seaman Joined: 19 April 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Topic: Pool Scene Posted: 04 September 2021 at 2:58am
	(143x176, 16 colours) Going a bit crazy from staring at this for so long. I can't tell if it's anywhere close to ready for the gallery and just needs a bit of cleanup or if it's super messy but it's burned in my retinas so deep I've lost the ability to tell. I would really appreciate any comments or suggestions. Main concern is the bushes near the edge of the pool that I must have reworked around a thousand times, but the water gets me scratching my head too.
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Posted: 04 September 2021 at 7:51am
	The border of pool looks to flat in comparison the rest, can put a line ever X pixels. So it look more like ceramic.
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turesiht Midshipman Joined: 17 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 04 September 2021 at 11:33am
	It's a fine piece! I would remove the blue pixels in the shadow in the bottom part of the image, I think they contrast too much. And maybe some stray pixels here and there. Good job overall!
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cancrizans Seaman Joined: 19 April 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 04 September 2021 at 10:49pm
	Thanks guys, then I think I'll try to implement your suggestions, and do some cleanup and it should be good to go!
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