Pixel Joint Forum: [Feedback] Asuka Langley (Evangelion)

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   So, this is the first time I try do a character in a large size and I think on make this Asuka Langley from Evangelion, as is the first time I have some dobouts and mistakes and I am here to ask for little help of the great artist.

Reference image:

https://imgur.com/a/B7ByNnq

Pixel art:

https://imgur.com/a/cmRhQAv

-My most big fear is the face, so, have some recommendations for it?

-Have some recommendation about the body? 

-Im still working with the hair.

VERY, VERY THANKS for your time and help.

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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Topic: [Feedback] Asuka Langley (Evangelion) Posted: 07 September 2022 at 2:40pm
	So, this is the first time I try do a character in a large size and I think on make this Asuka Langley from Evangelion, as is the first time I have some dobouts and mistakes and I am here to ask for little help of the great artist. Reference image: https://imgur.com/a/B7ByNnq Pixel art: https://imgur.com/a/cmRhQAv -My most big fear is the face, so, have some recommendations for it? -Have some recommendation about the body? -Im still working with the hair. VERY, VERY THANKS for your time and help.
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NancyGold Commander Joined: 27 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 526	Posted: 08 September 2022 at 1:25am
	You messed up the eyes, moved nose to the left, and and the mouth is more pronounced and has a different expression. You also botched the contrast, by making the suit lighter, so now it appears glowing, and distracts attention from the face, which was the brightest part of the original. Hair is the same - too bright. The only bright thing about the original hair was the specular reflection. Right hip has strange shadow deviating from the anatomy. Here is a quick edit ->
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Posted: 08 September 2022 at 7:11am
	WoW! really impress how small changes can do a big improvement, reall thanks for the time and help. You are totally right with all the face things. I was thinking about the suit too, think the same. The color hair was more place holder for the shape. Once again really thanks for the help, I gonna work on the hair and hope you can some time to check it later.
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Maye Midshipman Joined: 27 November 2020 Online Status: Online Posts: 97	Posted: 30 September 2022 at 10:31am
	Well! Here's the update of Asuka https://imgur.com/iwqWlf9 All ideas, reviews, comments, help are welcome.
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