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matriax
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I making a logo like this "demoscene" for my website. You can view the process in images here: http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep1.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep2.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep3.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep4.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep5.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep6.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep7.gif http://videotuts.webcindario.com/demoscene/1Demoscenep8.gif And this is the the last i made: What you think? C+c plz. |
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Sibix
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i dont think the enter fits in with the piece. the moon is nice.. maybe add some randomstars in the bg
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matriax
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jalonso
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It is technically made well and the colors work well, I would say it's
too over the top. The pages better be banging cause with this splash
page your site could easily be dissappointing. The enter typestyle is
not a good choice for this style, and the reflection is overkill. The
new clouds with the lightning are not needed, it's like a whole scene
and distracts from the page objective (enter). The copy is overdone a
bit too. You've got a pinball over the eye, an amethyst on the X and
pearls or something on the T, all extras that take away from the impact
of this stylized display font. The 2006 is over decorated to the point
of invisibility. Are dandelions really needed on the grass? A comet
fits well but you went with four of them, one of which has wings, again
over the top. I suggest you take an objective look at your splash page
before going with it.
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hawken
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glad you got the psgnosis owl in!
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fil_razorback
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Jalonso is not wrong...I had watched the scene for about one minute without READING the text :/
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Psychotic_Carp
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I agree about the "enter" part, remove it and add standard text for entering the site, the rest of it was very well done
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matriax
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PixelSnader
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personally, i dón't like the diversity of styles you have in there. its not working together well, it appears as 5 or 6 different pieces mashed together. there's no neat flow/transistion between the T and other letters styles for instance, and the background is a whole other level too. what i dó like is that you have achieved great detail with little colours, and not make it appear overly monochromatic. the rendering things (AA and such) are allso well executed. |
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jalonso
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Originally posted by matriax ...Well new update...C+C plz.. It seems you are really looking for P+EG (praise and ego stroking) |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Don't you mean P+ES? |
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jalonso
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It seems you are really looking for P+ES
thanks MoD |
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matriax
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Originally posted by jalonso
It seems you are really looking for P+ES thanks MoD ¿? Sorry i dont understand, what is P+ES ¿? |
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..::Naso::..
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Originally posted by jalonso
(praise and ego stroking) |
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Saboteur
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The new "T" is, and I quote, "Ick"
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Andy Tran
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Interesting update. I love the moon and water reflection to it.
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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the best part of this is the ball on the 'I'. i dont really like the T, but
the little glowing things all over are cool. i liked the bubbles btw. |
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Snark, we love yuu.
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