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Quote matriax Replybullet Topic: A logo for my web..
    Posted: 16 March 2006 at 10:50am
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Quote Sibix Replybullet Posted: 16 March 2006 at 11:02am
i dont think the enter fits in with the piece. the moon is nice.. maybe add some randomstars in the bg
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Quote matriax Replybullet Posted: 16 March 2006 at 1:35pm

Well another update:

Sibix, well the enter is provisional but i think is good and believe the final image will be with this style of enter, but i making another variantas. Thanks for the comment.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 16 March 2006 at 8:27pm
It is technically made well and the colors work well, I would say it's too over the top. The pages better be banging cause with this splash page your site could easily be dissappointing. The enter typestyle is not a good choice for this style, and the reflection is overkill. The new clouds with the lightning are not needed, it's like a whole scene and distracts from the page objective (enter). The copy is overdone a bit too. You've got a pinball over the eye, an amethyst on the X and pearls or something on the T, all extras that take away from the impact of this stylized display font. The 2006 is over decorated to the point of invisibility. Are dandelions really needed on the grass? A comet fits well but you went with four of them, one of which has wings, again over the top. I suggest you take an objective look at your splash page before going with it.
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Quote hawken Replybullet Posted: 16 March 2006 at 11:53pm
glad you got the psgnosis owl in! 
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Quote fil_razorback Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 12:56am
Jalonso is not wrong...I had watched the scene for about one minute without READING the text :/
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 5:21am
I agree about the "enter" part, remove it and add standard text for entering the site, the rest of it was very well done
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Quote matriax Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 6:12am

Well new update.

Yes, yes, is posible, I erase de bubbles... (i don't understand why all the people hate de bubbles XDD )

I change th fairy of the left and put into de point of "I". and adder more reflect of gras and... the iluminated "T" (not finished yet).

C+C plz

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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 10:47am

personally, i dón't like the diversity of styles you have in there. its not working together well, it appears as 5 or 6 different pieces mashed together.

there's no neat flow/transistion between the T and other letters styles for instance, and the background is a whole other level too.

what i dó like is that you have achieved great detail with little colours, and not make it appear overly monochromatic. the rendering things (AA and such) are allso well executed.


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:07pm
Originally posted by matriax

...Well new update...C+C plz..


It seems you are really looking for P+EG

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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:21pm

Don't you mean P+ES?


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:29pm
It seems you are really looking for P+ES

thanks MoD
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Quote matriax Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 2:40pm

Originally posted by jalonso

It seems you are really looking for P+ES

thanks MoD

¿? Sorry i dont understand, what is P+ES ¿?

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Quote ..::Naso::.. Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 11:09pm
Originally posted by jalonso


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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2006 at 11:11pm
The new "T" is, and I quote, "Ick"
"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Quote Andy Tran Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 12:35am
 Interesting update. I love the moon and water reflection to it.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 1:28am
the best part of this is the ball on the 'I'. i dont really like the T, but
the little glowing things all over are cool. i liked the bubbles btw.
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