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Shadowgamers
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Topic: A title too long (wip)
Posted: 12 April 2006 at 10:52pm

The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor", which I'm not diggin' at the moment, but its the best I can come up with..

Its smallish, because I like to try small things.

Also, I suck at guns. (blech, help on the would be appreciated...)
I'll add color, detail and a background later...

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Blick
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 12:56am

When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is too long. Interesting WIP so far, I'll be looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

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Shadowgamers
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 3:21am

Originally posted by Blick

When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is too long.

Time for some gun referencing. TO GOOGLE, HO!.

edit: and have at you a shoddy interpritation of light before I start to colour it... (with a barrel edit)

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J.A.M
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:38am

It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him?

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Shadowgamers
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 6:12am

Originally posted by J.A.M

It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him?

My horriblley designed character I dubbed "Delgeist" ( heres a larger picture, not that it provides any more help )

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Boder
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:56am

This is very awesome.

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Saiklor
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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:36am

just don't forget that things cast shadows to block the light. ie on his thigh, on the ground, etc.

love the wip stages you're showing us, quite fun and educational, thanks!

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Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:17pm

Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for.

And sweet wip, man. Liking the character annnd the gore an' stuff.

"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."

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Shadowgamers
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Posted: 14 April 2006 at 3:07am

Originally posted by Saboteur

Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for.

Originally posted by Shadowgamers

The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor"

Started on the horrible colour job, I'll start adding background details before I start going into detailing the colour with light sources and stuffs

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PixelSnader
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Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:52pm

i thought he was holding a sawn off shotgun.. oh well..

1 - the grey will look ptryy boring in the end i think. give it some slight hue. light blue usually looks good on something white

2 - where does the bullet exit? either the impaler is make of something pretty bulletproof, or the bullet is very weak right now.

waiting to see this unfold

ps. i liked the other, linked delgeist better, it looks more like a creature

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Shadowgamers Seaman Joined: 10 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Topic: A title too long (wip) Posted: 12 April 2006 at 10:52pm
	The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor", which I'm not diggin' at the moment, but its the best I can come up with.. Its smallish, because I like to try small things. Also, I suck at guns. (blech, help on the would be appreciated...) I'll add color, detail and a background later... Edited by Shadowgamers
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Blick Commander Joined: 21 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 389	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 12:56am
	When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is too long. Interesting WIP so far, I'll be looking forward to seeing how it turns out.

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Shadowgamers Seaman Joined: 10 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 3:21am
	*Originally posted by Blick* When it comes to pistols, the actual handle part of the gun is surprisingly long. Nearly as long as the barrel. Also, your barrel is too long. Time for some gun referencing. TO GOOGLE, HO!. edit: and have at you a shoddy interpritation of light before I start to colour it... (with a barrel edit) Edited by Shadowgamers
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J.A.M Seaman Joined: 12 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 5:38am
	It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him?
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Shadowgamers Seaman Joined: 10 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 6:12am
	*Originally posted by J.A.M* It's looking interesting, but what exactly is it that has impaled him? My horriblley designed character I dubbed "Delgeist" ( heres a larger picture, not that it provides any more help )
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Boder Commander Joined: 07 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 112	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 10:56am
	This is very awesome.
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Saiklor Commander Joined: 16 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 11:36am
	just don't forget that things cast shadows to block the light. ie on his thigh, on the ground, etc. love the wip stages you're showing us, quite fun and educational, thanks!
	www.semesteratsea.com
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Saboteur Commander Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888	Posted: 13 April 2006 at 2:17pm
	Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for. And sweet wip, man. Liking the character annnd the gore an' stuff.
	"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Shadowgamers Seaman Joined: 10 July 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Posted: 14 April 2006 at 3:07am
	*Originally posted by Saboteur* Duuuude. I want to read whatever thats a title for. *Originally posted by Shadowgamers* The original title is "And then it killed me, And I, by some stretch of chance, returned the favor" Started on the horrible colour job, I'll start adding background details before I start going into detailing the colour with light sources and stuffs Edited by Shadowgamers
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 14 April 2006 at 6:52pm
	i thought he was holding a sawn off shotgun.. oh well.. 1 - the grey will look ptryy boring in the end i think. give it some slight hue. light blue usually looks good on something white 2 - where does the bullet exit? either the impaler is make of something pretty bulletproof, or the bullet is very weak right now. waiting to see this unfold ps. i liked the other, linked delgeist better, it looks more like a creature
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