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Dutrho
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Trying to work only with shadows.
anything I can add, remove, change? ![]() |
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Souly
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Maybe an indent at the top of the upper lip?
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Dutrho
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Like this?
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Souly
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Hmm, maybe a bit thicker?
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Dutrho
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a little thicker.
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Souly
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Now it doesn't look as plain...
I don't really know what you could add to it. Maybe somtheing near the eyes? I mean they seem very large but not that visually intresting. |
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PixelSnader
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tis a cool idea, but i think you need more shade and less white. allso try to make it less symmetrical |
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Dutrho
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not sure what you mean about less white
but for the symmetrical, probably the next one I make wont be symmetrical, probably something based off the artwork by KMFDM |
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EyeCraft
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Originally posted by Dutrho probably something based off the artwork by KMFDM Awwwwwww thats a sick idea. The artwork isn't actually done by KMFDM, they enlist this artist, who's also done some covers for other bands, Faith No More's King For A Day, Fool For A Lifetime, for instance ![]() This piece is ok, i think it needs black around it defining more of the head, black perhaps defining the cheekbones. |
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aartuvahliks;
Seaman ![]() Joined: 23 June 2014 Location: Canada Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
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better AA always helps.
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THE JESUS
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Dutrho
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tried to soften it a bit further but I hate adding a fift colour to it, is there another way if doing it without adding extra colours that I dont know of?
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jalonso
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The cheekbone shape, the straight egde bothers me, seems like their
lighting is diff than the rest. Also with this type of *overhead*
lighting (?) the thingies between the nose and upper lip would not
shadow this way, it would be the center area not the ridge that
shadows. The lower lip is not indicated to potrude enough to create
such a thick shadow. Also the nose appears to be wide and flat so the
shadow would be thicker. Do you have the *face* for this to show?
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Dutrho
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the source material for what I'm working on is a mix of these 2 images
![]() ![]() the obey logo for the frontal view and the kmfdm poster for the shading |
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jalonso
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Those are quite conflicting since the Andre the Giant is a stylized
silkscreen image utilizing head-on lighting, whereas the KMFDM is top
lightning (as I suspected). In this case I would eliminate a color or
two and skew the lighting just off-center (like head-on to the side of
the nose a bit) to allow for interesting shapes.
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Dutrho
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yeah I think i'm gonna try that, but tomorow. I hate going to work
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Dutrho
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![]() this is turning out to be harder than I imagined. light source left of center. |
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PixelSnader
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much, much better
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Dutrho
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true, but still far from perfect.
i'll keep working on it |
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