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   So I'm trying to do more pixels and wanting to make some figures. Before I go ahead with the coloring (which I'm sure will take a good bit of time) I'm wondering if anyone sees anything really wrong with this lineart I made up before going on as it looks quite complicated with all the trim and spikes and plates on the armor:

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kendi64 Midshipman Joined: 07 May 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Topic: lineart Posted: 26 April 2006 at 2:32pm
	So I'm trying to do more pixels and wanting to make some figures. Before I go ahead with the coloring (which I'm sure will take a good bit of time) I'm wondering if anyone sees anything really wrong with this lineart I made up before going on as it looks quite complicated with all the trim and spikes and plates on the armor:
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 2:58pm
	Well, I love it, but that pose seems really uncomfortable; no one stands with their legs 3 feet apart. and his body seems farther away than his legs.
	RPG is numberwang.
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Bifur Commander Joined: 15 April 2006 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 4:35pm
	the cape seems atached to the floor since it doenst show the contourn of the leg and yeah porn star pose
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MurrMan Commander Joined: 19 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 177	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 5:34pm
	*Originally posted by Bifur* and yeah porn star pose yup, one full clothed and spiky porn star... just the way women like em...
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Bifur Commander Joined: 15 April 2006 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 6:13pm
	*Originally posted by MurrMan* *Originally posted by Bifur* and yeah porn star pose yup, one full clothed and spiky porn star... just the way women like em... was talking about the hand in the leg and bent torso (that's what a porno star does to show off their boobs and stuff) Edited by Bifur
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:25pm
	I don't work the way you do. I lineart and color at the same time so its hard to tell if something is wrong but will try for you cuz your lineart has potential. As mentioned the leg behing the cape does not make sense, the cape also just abrubtly ends behind his other leg and between the forearm and hip. On the legs I would like for aesthetic reasons if all the scales had the same angle. If you don't agree, the second from the boot up is way to thick for the others. The third is way off. The face really shound have a bit of a turn, this head on make his face boring. As for the porn pose I like it, don't know bout the thing hangin tho (hehe). Again color will help visualize. Maybe you could color block it for us to see.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Setzer Commander Joined: 18 December 2016 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 780	Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:44pm
	the only flaw I see is his left leg, it seems so far apart, and it seems to not be there at all behind the cape. his hands and his head also seem abit small. apart from that and what jalonso mentioned, it's quite bitchin.

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 27 April 2006 at 12:47am
	It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P I wanna see it colored! Edited by Aleiav
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kendi64 Midshipman Joined: 07 May 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 27 April 2006 at 11:22am
	*Originally posted by Monkey 'o Doom* Well, I love it, but that pose seems really uncomfortable; no one stands with their legs 3 feet apart. and his body seems farther away than his legs. I think I figured out what could be the problem with the "pose" and why he has his feet so far apart... he supposed to be holding a war axe, but didn't put it in yet because I wasn't sure if I wanted it in or I was thinking maybe it would be better to color then put in the axe if I like it. I was afraid the boot/leg was too big? And yes I was unsure of the plate above the boot, I'll have to even it out the spacing. If anyone wants can feel free to try to redo the bottom of the cape as his left side of the cape is pulled forward and his rightside of the cape been pulled back.
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Bifur Commander Joined: 15 April 2006 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 27 April 2006 at 12:12pm
	*Originally posted by Aleiav* It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P I wanna see it colored! The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that. ===== Also i don't know why you didn't finish the cape in the left side , in the shoulders. Edited by Bifur
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:12pm
	*Originally posted by Bifur* *Originally posted by Aleiav* It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P I wanna see it colored! The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that. ===== Too dimished to stand with your legs apart and tilt to the side slightly?
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 29 April 2006 at 1:10pm
	I think it looks great so far - Super dynamic pose.

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Bifur Commander Joined: 15 April 2006 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 29 April 2006 at 6:15pm
	*Originally posted by Aleiav* *Originally posted by Bifur* *Originally posted by Aleiav* It's an awesome start. Personally, I don't mind the pose. I actually like it. Something different besides 1,000 other buff guys in a "grrr" position. :P I wanna see it colored! The problem I see with the pose it's not that he is not doing "grr" pose , it because if you wear a full gear like that you should have your movements too.. diminished to do that. ===== Too dimished to stand with your legs apart and tilt to the side slightly? At least i think it would be hell unconfortable , if he falls he'll not able to stand ( if he's not super human) so i would not risk xD
	I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 30 April 2006 at 12:56am
	aah... okie doke. I've never work a heavy metal suit of armor.
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