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Corvox
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 10 May 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 40 |
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I need help Improving the quilty of my house, Dont be afraid to post what you really think Thanks in Advance Shane Updated with my 1st attempt at shadowing Updated with stuff in windows (image is only 128x128 hard to add to much detail,next one will be 384x256) EDIT (REMOVED 1ST PERSON VIEW)
EDIT tried more with Shading Roof Edited by Corvox |
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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1st try? if so.. nice. you got quite a bit of detail in there, thats good. however, the colours are very bright, as in saturated. try to make them hang a bit more towards green 60%(photoshop) 150(mspaint) saturation should work ok i think and the think lacks shading, pick a lightsource and put shadows on the house, mainly on the roof. i think if you were to make the ''backside'' of the roof and the 2 triangles darker it'd help some and i'd put some interesting things in the windows |
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Okko
Seaman ![]() Joined: 19 April 2006 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 37 |
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I'm a beginner in pixel art, but I will give you my advice as a "spectator" There's something strange with your house. The roof looks like in 3D whereas the other part is in a flat 2D. You should make it fully in iso, it would make it more realistic. Maybe some more texturing on the wall and the window. Hope it will help you Edited by Okko |
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Corvox
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 10 May 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 40 |
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The Reason its looks like that is Im trying to copy the old skool Final Fansty style. I dont use Photoshop and yes its my 1st attempt. Ill darken the colors and see what happens. Also I do have photoshop I find with all its plugins it is so tempting to use them. My 1st attempt with a person using photoshop.
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Use paint or some other program, or fix up photoshop for pixel art (however you do that). |
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PixelSnader
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i don't see any shading on the house?
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Monkey 'o Doom
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I was talking about the brick thing and the little character.
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Corvox
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 10 May 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 40 |
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On the house the back side of the roof is slighlty darker and so is the triangle. as for the brick hallway there is no shding at all and it was done in Mspaint completly. Sorry I am new to this and trying to do figure out how shading is done. Click on 1st house and 2nd one, then you can see the differnce (Should I go darker?) Also just did a mortal and pastle advice on this? UpDate- Oh btw if anyone has a image that can show me how to better shade my house please do post ^_^ P.S. Sorry for all the post.I'm happy to have found this site, not much on the net to help a kid like myself learn, and any advice is more then welcome and I am greatful for all the help.Now if I can find a good guide to drawing game people ^_^ Edit: As I create Objects for my Game I will post them in this thread for C & C. Please help me learn to better my work. Thanks in advance Hammer Nail- Wooden Throwing Axe- Hatchet- Bow saw- Shovel- Sword- CarrotTop Carrot Stage 2 of carrot Fence EDIT Numchucks Ruby MOST OF ALL IMAGES ARE SHOP IMAGES/PLAYERS BAG ICONS Shading has eluded me thus far I have only about 2-3 weeks experence with pixel art so an C and C is welcomed. Also im not the best Color chooser, if anyone knows a good place for metal color tones let me know I mainly need color sets for Iron,copper,steel,bronze. Edited by Corvox |
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Corvox
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 10 May 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 40 |
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I wont be around after 4 Pm today, but will be adding more to this Starting on Monday, Please tell me how to fix My art.
Also Im having problems making a Hoe and Rake, if anyone care to explain how I can make them Please do ;) P.S Desription of Game This project is going to be large.the game will be based on Mid-Evil times. Orc
P.S I notice lots of views but not much C&C. well hope there is more by monday. Oh also, No leeching my graphics I know there poor quilty but im here to learn to improve them, I could of been like the 1000s of other people who rip art to use for there game, but I dont see a point to rip it, when you can learn to create it.
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