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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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This is my new submission to Pixeldam. It is a museum of bugs and
beetles and other creepy crawlers. I was inspired by Bliz and his
awesome palette used in the "Judge Dredd" trucks in the gallery. Went
on his site and he had a bunch of bugs.
The base that you see here is the Pixeldam base (the blue parts) not made by me. I am unsure that the brown colored steps and floor are the right colors for this. I tried the same blues and it didn't look good. Should I place lots people on it hanging aroung and going in/out, or leave it bare? Can you tell the eggs are lamposts? Are the benches too "wrong". I am going for an Art Nuveau kind of look. The stuff on the building are mossy vines, that I placed to soften the structure a little bit since there are no windows. c+c welcome and requested ![]() Edited by jalonso |
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Blueberry_pie
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Whoamg! That's excellent.
Were the benches around it done by you too or are they part of the template? I think they could use some texture. Either way - this is awesome. Can't wait to see this develop :) |
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Ensellitis
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this will be, by far, the most kick ass thing on pixeldam
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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cure
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The transparency of the wings is kickass. Those (stolen, lol) colors look nice. God, I want to live in THAT building.
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Skull
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Wow.. It looks so different in it's style. Amazing. Really great trans. on those wings.
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Larwick
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Jalonso, you OWN.
Perhaps the doorway could use some work? |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Hmm.
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Setzer
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I found it odd hwo big of a shadow those lightpoles were giving yet the huge bug gave none. [actually, after zooming in, I noticed they were the base to the ground; this whole thing needs shadows, though]
you should know everything else it needs, basically cleaning up ;) |
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Saboteur
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The one line running ground-level across the front wall of the building is annoying me, because it lines up with the lines in the sidewalk. Such a consistent line makes my brain chop the legs off where they intersect, making it hard to figure out what's going on. I need a new brain, this one is stupid. Regardless, you've not stopped making sweet, sweet love with whatever program you use, and I'm loving that fact. You're brilliant, >(")< |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Bifur
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jalonso iso is the one wich doesnt stay in blocky thing , love it
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![]() I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow... |
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jalonso
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Lar, thx for catching the lame door, I had missed that.
Sab, I have tried so hard to see the line you refer to and can't find it :/ Beefur, that's the trick to making iso work interesting :| pie, and others too, this is an update showing what I made in color and the Pixeldam base in greyscale. The wing shadow is not in the correct place on purpose cuz it looked ugly, composition wise. I will now polish it up while looking for that line? and while any other error is called, thx again. ![]() Edited by jalonso |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Why does the wingshadow turn the grey bar orange but the grey (road?) blue?
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Ensellitis
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the wing is orange, it is orange on white because it is semi transparent, so the light filters through the color and causes hues
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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But what about the road, ensell?
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CDI
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it's special... it looks unaltered, like a shadow... of light
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jalonso
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MoD, Those are lights on the roads of this futuristic hood. See the first post.
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Saboteur
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The wings aren't centered over the head. Edited by Saboteur |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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PixelSnader
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the fence is pretty ok art nouveau, and so are the benches' feet (?) buit the top of the benches are far to plain, and the builing is totally not art nouveau-ish
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Aleiav
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Looking AMAZING so far. But I gotta say I perfer the one without the blue.
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jalonso
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Aleiav, I have no control over the blues. It's the base on Pixeldam.
snader, I realize the architecture is not Art Nuveau. I meant with the use of colors and the and the wings being like stained glass, the rusty copper and the like. rather than actual Art Nuveau architecture :/ Sab, you are awesome. Because its easier to move the head, rather than the wings, I'll move that, great catch. You are also right about the simplistic line break. I will just redo the whole front of the building using vertical breaks to help that out. |
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Aleiav
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Not the blue of the sidewalk. The second version seems to have a bluer sidewalk around the museum than the first. Did you greyscale the rest of the neighboorhood in the second one?
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Morgan
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Awesome. I do think you might be overdoing it with the color of the wingshadow. Seems more colorful than the wing when it should be less. Also, a little rim-light on the "eggs" might be nice. |
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jalonso
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I've moved the head to be centered and redrawn the whole front of the building in the hopes of meeting Sab's approval
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Saboteur
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Sweeeeet, and life is complete. Mwaha :) |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Aleiav
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more awesomeness!
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Psychotic_Carp
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I hate looking at your stuff sometimes, I feel like my stuff is complete crap when I look at things like this
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Larwick
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Looks awesome jal, but one thing that bugs me is the people. The old lady and the guy walking down the stairs seem in awkward poses. Methinks.
BUt hoorah it's great. |
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Souly
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Wouldn't the shadow from the wing have more of a redish tinge?
Since the wings are transparent. |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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@Sab, I'm so relieved :D
@Lar, I do fail at anything sprite :( @Souly, Yes the wing would cast a pinkish shadow. I added some red to the wing shadows. I was trying for the lowest possible color count :/ This is my final submitted to Pixeldam. I will post in the gallery after its posted on Pixeldam. Post closed and thx to all! EDIT: dammit, there's a blavk blob left over from when I moved the head. Will fix and resubmit. ![]() Edited by jalonso |
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HesterInimical
Seaman ![]() Joined: 28 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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it's quite amazing i liked teh roads why did you delete it in your latest version??
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Blueberry_pie
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Originally posted by HesterInimical it's quite amazing i liked teh roads why did you delete it in your latest version?? Jalonso is just showing what he did himself... the roads are part of the Pixeldam template. Edited by Blueberry_pie |
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