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Quote jalonso Replybullet Topic: >(")< museum
    Posted: 23 June 2006 at 12:25am
This is my new submission to Pixeldam. It is a museum of bugs and beetles and other creepy crawlers. I was inspired by Bliz and his awesome palette used in the "Judge Dredd" trucks in the gallery. Went on his site and he had a bunch of bugs.

The base that you see here is the Pixeldam base (the blue parts) not made by me. I am unsure that the brown colored steps and floor are the right colors for this. I tried the same blues and it didn't look good. Should I place lots people on it hanging aroung and going in/out, or leave it bare? Can you tell the eggs are lamposts? Are the benches too "wrong". I am going for an Art Nuveau kind of look. The stuff on the building are mossy vines, that I placed to soften the structure a little bit since there are no windows.

c+c welcome and requested





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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 1:30am
Whoamg! That's excellent.
Were the benches around it done by you too or are they part of the template? I think they could use some texture.

Either way - this is awesome. Can't wait to see this develop :)
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 2:07am
this will be, by far, the most kick ass thing on pixeldam 
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 2:17am
The transparency of the wings is kickass.  Those (stolen, lol) colors look nice.  God, I want to live in THAT building.
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 3:42am
Wow.. It looks so different in it's style. Amazing. Really great trans. on those wings.
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 3:57am
Jalonso, you OWN.

Perhaps the doorway could use some work?
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:17am

Hmm.

 

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Quote Setzer Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:21am
I found it odd hwo big of a shadow those lightpoles were giving yet the huge bug gave none. [actually, after zooming in, I noticed they were the base to the ground; this whole thing needs shadows, though]

you should know everything else it needs, basically cleaning up ;)
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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 12:55pm

The one line running ground-level across the front wall of the building is annoying me, because it lines up with the lines in the sidewalk. Such a consistent line makes my brain chop the legs off where they intersect, making it hard to figure out what's going on.

I need a new brain, this one is stupid.

Regardless, you've not stopped making sweet, sweet love with whatever program you use, and I'm loving that fact. You're brilliant, >(")<

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Quote Bifur Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 4:51pm
jalonso iso is the one wich doesnt stay in blocky thing , love it 

I know! Leafs shouldn't make shadow...
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:14pm
Lar, thx for catching the lame door, I had missed that.
Sab, I have tried so hard to see the line you refer to and can't find it :/
Beefur, that's the trick to making iso work interesting :|
pie, and others too, this is an update showing what I made in color and the Pixeldam base in greyscale.

The wing shadow is not in the correct place on purpose cuz it looked ugly, composition wise. I will now polish it up while looking for that line? and while any other error is called, thx again.







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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:23pm
Why does the wingshadow turn the grey bar orange but the grey (road?) blue?

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:30pm
the wing is orange, it is orange on white because it is semi transparent, so the light filters through the color and causes hues
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:32pm
But what about the road, ensell?

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Quote CDI Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:35pm
it's special... it looks unaltered, like a shadow... of light
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 23 June 2006 at 8:51pm
MoD, Those are lights on the roads of this futuristic hood. See the first post.
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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2006 at 1:11am


That is the line I was referring to. It is now much more broken up in your update, so my whining and insane particularity has been rendered obsolete.
Something still looks wrong.

The wings aren't centered over the head.
and in the wing's shadow the line is colourful. The line on the street. (Edit - it's supposed to be like that. Oops and meh)



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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2006 at 5:03pm
the fence is pretty ok art nouveau, and so are the benches' feet (?) buit the top of the benches are far to plain, and the builing is totally not art nouveau-ish

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2006 at 5:33pm
Looking AMAZING so far. But I gotta say I perfer the one without the blue. 
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2006 at 7:13pm
Aleiav, I have no control over the blues. It's the base on Pixeldam.

snader, I realize the architecture is not Art Nuveau. I meant with the use of colors and the and the wings being like stained glass, the rusty copper and the like. rather than actual Art Nuveau architecture :/

Sab, you are awesome. Because its easier to move the head, rather than the wings, I'll move that, great catch. You are also right about the simplistic line break. I will just redo the whole front of the building using vertical breaks to help that out.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 8:53am
Not the blue of the sidewalk. The second version seems to have a bluer sidewalk around the museum than the first. Did you greyscale the rest of the neighboorhood in the second one? 
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Quote Morgan Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2006 at 11:04am

Awesome.

I do think you might be overdoing it with the color of the wingshadow. Seems more colorful than the wing when it should be less. Also, a little rim-light on the "eggs" might be nice.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 1:07pm
I've moved the head to be centered and redrawn the whole front of the building in the hopes of meeting Sab's approval 


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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 1:28pm

Sweeeeet, and life is complete.
'cept for the part where your railing stops abruptly opposite the stairs, behind all those people.

Mwaha :)

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 2:01pm
more awesomeness!
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 2:31pm
I hate looking at your stuff sometimes, I feel like my stuff is complete crap when I look at things like this
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 2:36pm
Looks awesome jal, but one thing that bugs me is the people. The old lady and the guy walking down the stairs seem in awkward poses. Methinks.

BUt hoorah it's great.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 26 June 2006 at 7:42pm
Wouldn't the shadow from the wing have more of a redish tinge?
Since the wings are transparent.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 27 June 2006 at 11:40pm
@Sab, I'm so relieved :D
@Lar, I do fail at anything sprite :(
@Souly, Yes the wing would cast a pinkish shadow. I added some red to the wing shadows. I was trying for the lowest possible color count :/

This is my final submitted to Pixeldam. I will post in the gallery after its posted on Pixeldam. Post closed and thx to all!

EDIT: dammit, there's a blavk blob left over from when I moved the head. Will fix and resubmit.




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Quote HesterInimical Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2006 at 10:11am
it's quite amazing i liked teh roads why did you delete it in your latest version??


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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 28 June 2006 at 10:18am
Originally posted by HesterInimical

it's quite amazing i liked teh roads why did you delete it in your latest version??

Jalonso is just showing what he did himself... the roads are part of the Pixeldam template.

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