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..::Naso::..
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Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
   Topic: Bear...Posted: 22 June 2005 at 10:03pm |
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Well this isent really a [WIP] but i want to see if i can get some C&c on it to make it kooler ^^
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Saboteur
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Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888 |
Posted: 23 June 2005 at 12:10am |
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The eyes look a little out of place. You've got gentle dithering all along the head, then an abrupt solid line surrounding the eyes. Try give the guy some hints at eyesockets. And I feel like it needs more detail. Maybe try for some more fur-like texturing on the body and face. |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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DragonSoar
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Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4 |
Posted: 23 June 2005 at 12:20pm |
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I feel I've seen this bear before somewhere before... hmmm. As Saboteur said there some AAing is needed on the abrupt lines, but also I suggest some selout as well. |
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..::Naso::..
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Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
Posted: 23 June 2005 at 3:59pm |
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Kool thanks, but were are the "abrupt lines" so i can fix them and DragonSoar, what is "Selout" ?
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Saboteur
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Posted: 23 June 2005 at 5:31pm |
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The abrupt lines are the outlines around the eyes.
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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..::Naso::..
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Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200 |
Posted: 23 June 2005 at 6:49pm |
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What do you want me to do with the lines around the eyes? AA them?
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Saboteur
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Posted: 23 June 2005 at 7:47pm |
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I was thinking more along the lines of showing indent in the face where eyes should be... or something. I'm not exactly sure, it just looks wrong.
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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DragonSoar
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Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4 |
Posted: 24 June 2005 at 12:45pm |
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Selout = Selective outlining, not having outlines in one dark colour.
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Jamie
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Joined: 24 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
Posted: 24 June 2005 at 12:54pm |
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Originally posted by DragonSoar
<FONT face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size=2>I feel I've seen this bear before somewhere before... hmmm. As Saboteur said there some AAing is needed on the abrupt lines, but also I suggest some selout as well. I belive this is newton the bear, so obious 
if its traced i dont know, but this is surely newton next time i suggest you post refrences |
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