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halfDemon
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   Topic: 4 Color Face (Almost FINAL)Posted: 09 August 2006 at 7:00pm |
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4 colors. Cartoony.
 What to add? Edited by halfDemon - 19 August 2006 at 11:08am |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 7:25pm |
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Add either an entire body or some floating hands and feet.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 09 August 2006 at 8:05pm |
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I fail at smoke:
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Anlina S.
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Posted: 10 August 2006 at 11:53am |
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Your shading seems to be almost entirely dithering... use some more solids to shade the back of his head and around the cheekbone and jaw. You've picked good values, and it should be a nicely contrasting piece, but it looks like of flat right now... more spotty than shaded.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 10 August 2006 at 10:24pm |
Better?
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Aleiav
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Posted: 11 August 2006 at 8:39pm |
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It looks like half of the face is missing. Not sure what you can do to fix it.
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Blick
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Posted: 11 August 2006 at 10:39pm |
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It looks like half of the face is missing. Not sure what you can do to fix it. I noticed this too. And I figure the easiest way to fix it is also the most obvious. Add more to the other side of his face. Quick and dirty edit time!  Another thing is the strange way his ear molds into his head and that black line made to seemingly show the edge of his cheekbone, they're both... not supposed to look like that. Ears usually curve upward when they connect to the head which would create the ear lobe or they have a connected ear lobe which still connects at a deeper angle than what you have. The thing about the harsh line under the cheek bone is that it's not where the cheekbone should be. The bone can actually be felt curving beneath your eye, level with the nose and the jaw comes into play when you feel lower than that. The edge of the cheek on this guy is level with his lips, which is really awkward. |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 12 August 2006 at 5:10pm |
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Well I gave it a try. I new it looked messed up, but I was having troub;e with the brows.
So which do you think is better?
 or  I'm still having problems with the cheek bone and ear.
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Aleiav
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Posted: 12 August 2006 at 8:19pm |
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the second one looks better, but the chin's a bit pointy.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 13 August 2006 at 11:37am |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 14 August 2006 at 12:57pm |
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Buzz
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Joined: 13 June 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
Posted: 14 August 2006 at 1:34pm |
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His body seems too big for his head...adn it looks like an after thought kind of, almost like it doesnt match...cant really point out whats bothering me about it, maybe some one else can...
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Blick
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Posted: 14 August 2006 at 4:56pm |
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The black line is too harsh and makes it appear like his head is pasted on.
His body seems too big for his head Looks to me to be the other way around. His head seems too big for his body currently. |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 14 August 2006 at 5:50pm |
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Originally posted by Blick
Which black line? I also thought that the body doesn't seem likes it's actually connected to the head, but I'm not sure why. I slapped on the body just to fill in some space... yeah, it's and after-thought.
The black line is too harsh and makes it appear like his head is pasted on. His body seems too big for his head Looks to me to be the other way around. His head seems too big for his body currently. |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 8:56pm |
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Small update:
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VictorR
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 9:16pm |
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looks really good so far..the ear kindof looks like a thumb
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halfDemon
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Posted: 16 August 2006 at 9:25pm |
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Thanks, and I'm not too happy with the ear. |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 19 August 2006 at 11:08am |
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Probably very close to final:
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Aleiav
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 4:11pm |
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background?
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halfDemon
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Posted: 20 August 2006 at 4:46pm |
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That would be the final part, I just don't know what to do is all.
Ah crap. I just realized the dimensions are 63x64. Meh, I guess I'll have to add a bit more to his left shoulder, then.
Edited by halfDemon - 20 August 2006 at 4:47pm |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 29 August 2006 at 3:10pm |
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Any suggestions on the bg, becaus I have no idea what to do. Or should I just leave it white? Choices, choices.
Edited with slight update:  Edited by halfDemon - 29 August 2006 at 8:00pm |
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halfDemon
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Posted: 31 August 2006 at 7:20pm |
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Grumble, grumble. Another small update. Still no ideas for bg. Prolly going to go with plain old white.
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tomster 785
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 1:50am |
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ummm where?0_o
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c[ ] help Brian take over Pixel Joint by making him edit your sig! (to get out typos)
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Saboteur
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 2:27am |
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I thiiiiiink you need to meet Brian's friend, mister flamethrower.
On second thought, maybe they've got a nice padded cell for you.
MAYBE there are rooms FULL of people like you! Who knows! Your future is wiiiide open, though I think I see a personalised lock looming over your horizon, if you don't stop making senseless posts.
I like the piece, HalfDemon. It bothers me that he has mounds of flesh for eyebrows, but it suits the style. S'coo, and greyscale pieces kick ass.
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tomster 785
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 2:40am |
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he said he made an update, what did he change, isn't it obvious what I just said, and don't answer the freakin question
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c[ ] help Brian take over Pixel Joint by making him edit your sig! (to get out typos)
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Larwick
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 5:32am |
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Originally posted by tomster 785
he said he made an update, what did he change, isn't it obvious what I just said, and don't answer the freakin question If we're going to have any more problems with you tomster, we won't be having them for much longer. Your post was completely random and was ACTUALLY quite hard to understand. This may well actually help you, http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=2824.
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tomster 785
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 5:51am |
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yeah I saw that thread in diversions, never looked at the animation though because flash stuff ALWAYS CRASHES MY DAMN COMPUTER!!! but still I looked at ti now all the same
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halfDemon
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Posted: 01 September 2006 at 4:41pm |
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Right, well out of all of that, I got this: thanks, Sab. He actually doesn't have any eyebrow's, just brows.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 09 September 2006 at 11:11pm |
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I decided to try a simple bg:
 Yes, no, maybe?
 Edited by halfDemon - 10 September 2006 at 12:35am |
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Souly
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Posted: 10 September 2006 at 1:33am |
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I like the dither background. :B
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Larwick
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Posted: 10 September 2006 at 3:21am |
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Man, the dither background looks really nice. I think you could do another variation of dithering for the darkest shade though, as it seems to cut off too quickly.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 10 September 2006 at 10:48am |
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Hmm, I tried:
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PixelSnader
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Posted: 11 September 2006 at 8:59am |
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quite smexxy, looks like an oldschool boxer
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Larwick
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Posted: 11 September 2006 at 11:29am |
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That looks great. The background really works.
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halfDemon
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Posted: 11 September 2006 at 8:06pm |
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Thanks, guys. Ready to be submititizied then?
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