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tommy j4sun
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128 |
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please give me advice on how to mak this better. |
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1ucas
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 27 June 2005 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 174 |
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Haha, that movie ruled. The tripods were awesome.
I think you need to give it a shiny metal texture. Animation would be great too. |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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I'll wait until I see the movie to crit this seriously.
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DarkSword
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3 |
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I'll start criticizing you in a moment. Until then, I'll point out the good things about your creation. From what I've seen of the movie, which is just an advert I saw on flashplayer.com, it looks quite close to the real deal. That pubic hair you added in is a pit disturbing, though. I don't wanna see that! >_< Okay. Stuff that can be fixed. First off, those colors used for the metal or whatever it is (alien flesh?) are way, way too saturated. I can't really look it up right now, but I'm guessing they're near the top end of the meter. You need to tone down the saturation a bit and add a midtone color. The largest problem (which can be fixxed quite easily) is the gray!!!! you used. As a rule of the tumb, try to avoid zero saturation colors like the plauge unless you have a really good reason to use them. When you work on this more, keep this in mind: things normally get bluer and more desaturated when they get darker. The voices told me to tell you to send $100 to George Foreman. |
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