Pixel Joint Forum: rework ness

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Bear
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Topic: rework ness
Posted: 02 July 2005 at 3:35pm

reworked a old piece of mine to see how much i've improved over the few months i've been pixeling

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Edited by Bear

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..::Naso::..
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 4:08pm

I like that new style yo have there but it looks weaird with that straw in his mouth, other then that its fine

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Claudster
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:05pm

You have improved so much!

I agree with the straw thing though, in a way it looks like is attached to his nose. Make it a different colour maybe?

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Bear
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:16pm

yah i need to fix that

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leel
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:18pm

some eye balls would be nice...

great improvement! I like the mouth, but now that Claudster mentioned it, it does look like the straw is attached to the nose

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Bear
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:42pm

^_^ srry but no eyeballs is ma style

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Saboteur
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:42pm

Uhh, you were fricking stellar to begin with! How dare you improve!

-sulks because of his relatively inadequate pixelling skills-

"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."

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1ucas
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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:57pm

Yeaaah, you improved a lot. I'd suggest you to change the angle of the straw, not remove it.

Hue shifts are fun, aren't they?

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Lawrence
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Posted: 03 July 2005 at 4:04am

The colours used for the shading is definitely much better, that's a great improvement.

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Rynov
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Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:10am

Pretty neat style there, I still like the neck area better on the old one though. Other than that, much improvement, great work!

Shine my shoes, infidel! http://www.kamikazerocket.deviantart.com

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Rifts
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Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:47am

r u kidding the straw is great ts 2 of my fav styles hes useing and the
no eyeballs is gr8 2 KEEP IT!!

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PixelSnader
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Posted: 04 July 2005 at 11:37am

some of you may want to hit me for this, but i prefer the original piece (well exept the 2 dots in his eyebrows)

even though you have improved your techniques, i think you should pay some more attention to some things. right now you have (in my opinion) sacrificed character for ''looks''

allso i dont like the lots of blue is nice.. hue shifts are good. practically essential even, but i think you overdone it on the skin

you allso pay more attention to your line execution, instead of the visual effect of it. look at the nose's curve. it used to be a nice curve, slightly aa-ed. but now its just a compilation of many different colours, and it hast lost its shape because of that

plus you made the eyes skincolour. thats a =( for me. white was much more expressive

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Rifts
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Posted: 04 July 2005 at 2:09pm

to me its got an alltogether differnt charicter to it instead of chearfull
smileing guy and i think it works better but i supose thgats just
opinion

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Bear Commander Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Topic: rework ness Posted: 02 July 2005 at 3:35pm
	reworked a old piece of mine to see how much i've improved over the few months i've been pixeling new old Edited by Bear
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..::Naso::.. Commander Joined: 13 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 4:08pm
	I like that new style yo have there but it looks weaird with that straw in his mouth, other then that its fine
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Claudster Seaman Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:05pm
	You have improved so much! I agree with the straw thing though, in a way it looks like is attached to his nose. Make it a different colour maybe?
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Bear Commander Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 5:16pm
	yah i need to fix that
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:18pm
	some eye balls would be nice... great improvement! I like the mouth, but now that Claudster mentioned it, it does look like the straw is attached to the nose
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Bear Commander Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:42pm
	^_^ srry but no eyeballs is ma style
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Saboteur Commander Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:42pm
	Uhh, you were fricking stellar to begin with! How dare you improve! -sulks because of his relatively inadequate pixelling skills-
	"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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1ucas Commander Joined: 27 June 2005 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Posted: 02 July 2005 at 11:57pm
	Yeaaah, you improved a lot. I'd suggest you to change the angle of the straw, not remove it. Hue shifts are fun, aren't they?
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Lawrence Commander Joined: 30 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 481	Posted: 03 July 2005 at 4:04am
	The colours used for the shading is definitely much better, that's a great improvement.
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Rynov Midshipman Joined: 03 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 59	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:10am
	Pretty neat style there, I still like the neck area better on the old one though. Other than that, much improvement, great work!
	Shine my shoes, infidel! http://www.kamikazerocket.deviantart.com
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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 10:47am
	r u kidding the straw is great ts 2 of my fav styles hes useing and the no eyeballs is gr8 2 KEEP IT!!
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 11:37am
	some of you may want to hit me for this, but i prefer the original piece (well exept the 2 dots in his eyebrows) even though you have improved your techniques, i think you should pay some more attention to some things. right now you have (in my opinion) sacrificed character for ''looks'' allso i dont like the lots of blue is nice.. hue shifts are good. practically essential even, but i think you overdone it on the skin you allso pay more attention to your line execution, instead of the visual effect of it. look at the nose's curve. it used to be a nice curve, slightly aa-ed. but now its just a compilation of many different colours, and it hast lost its shape because of that plus you made the eyes skincolour. thats a =( for me. white was much more expressive
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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 2:09pm
	to me its got an alltogether differnt charicter to it instead of chearfull smileing guy and i think it works better but i supose thgats just opinion
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