Pixel Joint Forum: 2 new (Anatomy) (PHead)

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VictorR
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Topic: 2 new (Anatomy) (PHead)
Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:01pm

Suposively this was an anatomy study I was doing but w.e. I think it turned out decent..Not too keen on the colors though, the face was again a quicky and so was the hair.

And this is a little something else I made. I was browsing the galerries and came upon a big one so I made a little mini one:) I copied the colors from the original so all the credit for that goes to him. The guys supposed to be flexing on this one, his left arm didnt come out too well.

CNC Welocme

Edited by VictorR - 17 September 2006 at 11:02pm

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Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:07pm

To my understanding, the pecs are usually further out than the shoulders, which means they'd overlap them, kinda.

M'iunno what I'm talking about. I just know I'm right.

And mirrored boo.

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Souly
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Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:39pm

You've got the pecks MUCH too high on the first one.
And the face is much too pointy.

Edited by Souly - 17 September 2006 at 11:39pm

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Okko
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Posted: 18 September 2006 at 3:50am

Someone said that even beginner advice could b useful, so here I go :)

On the second character, the head looks flat compare to the body.

By the way, the rest of his body looks good to me.

One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day.

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ceddo
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Posted: 18 September 2006 at 5:10am

The pecs should be lower and have more volume (the character looks kinda flat as it is now). Also, his thoracic cage looks like it has a strange shape. Try to accentuate the end of the thoracic cage, and add some side muscles next to the abs (they're the muscles in my opinion that make the difference between a weakling and a schwarzenegger).

Other than that, the shading is good (besides the fact that you just copied one side and flipped it over to make it symmetrical to the other) and the head is a bit too egg-shaped.. try to make it look more boxy.

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ulbandi
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Posted: 18 September 2006 at 12:12pm

Anatomy study: In addition to what others pointed out, his waist/abdomen looks too thin compared to the the rest of his body.

Pyramid Head: PH's helmet looks like a 2D triangle, and it shouldn't be symmetrical like it is now. I'd try putting it at an angle so the front comes forward a bit and you can see it's a dimensional object, not a flat shape. His left arm is a little off too, but the rest looks pretty good.

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VictorR Seaman Joined: 30 July 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Topic: 2 new (Anatomy) (PHead) Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:01pm
	Suposively this was an anatomy study I was doing but w.e. I think it turned out decent..Not too keen on the colors though, the face was again a quicky and so was the hair. And this is a little something else I made. I was browsing the galerries and came upon a big one so I made a little mini one:) I copied the colors from the original so all the credit for that goes to him. The guys supposed to be flexing on this one, his left arm didnt come out too well. CNC Welocme Edited by VictorR - 17 September 2006 at 11:02pm
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Saboteur Commander Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888	Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:07pm
	To my understanding, the pecs are usually further out than the shoulders, which means they'd overlap them, kinda. M'iunno what I'm talking about. I just know I'm right. And mirrored boo.
	"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:39pm
	You've got the pecks MUCH too high on the first one. And the face is much too pointy. Edited by Souly - 17 September 2006 at 11:39pm
	I am the jesus of PJ.
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Okko Seaman Joined: 19 April 2006 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 18 September 2006 at 3:50am
	Someone said that even beginner advice could b useful, so here I go :) On the second character, the head looks flat compare to the body. By the way, the rest of his body looks good to me.
	One day I will find a great, cool, funny and original signature. One day.
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ceddo Commander Joined: 01 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 466	Posted: 18 September 2006 at 5:10am
	The pecs should be lower and have more volume (the character looks kinda flat as it is now). Also, his thoracic cage looks like it has a strange shape. Try to accentuate the end of the thoracic cage, and add some side muscles next to the abs (they're the muscles in my opinion that make the difference between a weakling and a schwarzenegger). Other than that, the shading is good (besides the fact that you just copied one side and flipped it over to make it symmetrical to the other) and the head is a bit too egg-shaped.. try to make it look more boxy.
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ulbandi Seaman Joined: 16 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 18 September 2006 at 12:12pm
	Anatomy study: In addition to what others pointed out, his waist/abdomen looks too thin compared to the the rest of his body. Pyramid Head: PH's helmet looks like a 2D triangle, and it shouldn't be symmetrical like it is now. I'd try putting it at an angle so the front comes forward a bit and you can see it's a dimensional object, not a flat shape. His left arm is a little off too, but the rest looks pretty good.
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