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Topic: Adarias' Lines
Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:02pm

I'm lacking a name at the moment.. and have recently found a giant likeing to fills..

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Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:13pm

kind of grey colours, but nice shading so far

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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 3:11am

Originally posted by snader

kind of grey colours, but nice shading so far

Noted, I've introduced some browns and dark reds, for the cloth.

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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 7:17am

I remember this lineart

. Looking quite good so far, though the white on the skin seems a little confusing, perhaps try a more fleshed out highlight?
Looking forward to seeing how this progresses.

Edited by EyeCraft - 27 October 2006 at 7:17am

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Skull
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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 9:25am

Originally posted by EyeCraft

Looking quite good so far, though the white on the skin seems a little confusing, perhaps try a more fleshed out highlight?

I see your point :

I might re-use the white if I make the highlights more noticable.

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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 8:37pm

Originally posted by Skull

I see your point :

She has 2 points, way up firm and high....

Nice work so far but I wouldent use white the do the highlights....of course that my opinion I could be wrong

Edited by Psychotic_Carp - 27 October 2006 at 10:05pm

got game?

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jalonso
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Posted: 27 October 2006 at 11:45pm

I love this lineart. You're doing a good coloring job so far. I hope you consider a BG/setting for her. If not, its cool.
TIP: White and Black are your enemies (more often than not).

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Posted: 28 October 2006 at 12:20am

Originally posted by jalonso

I love this lineart. You're doing a good coloring job so far. I hope you consider a BG/setting for her. If not, its cool.
TIP: White and Black are your enemies (more often than not).

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Yeah, black was much too dark, so I've changed that.

A background is a nice idea, but I'm not sure what I'd do, if anything.

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Posted: 28 October 2006 at 4:34am

a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it...

I like shiny things, i do indeed.

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Posted: 28 October 2006 at 5:05am

Originally posted by Artisan

a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it...

Gasp - that'll be cruel.. but awesome looking. I think I'll leave out a background, for now anway.

Finished piece:

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Posted: 28 October 2006 at 7:05am

i'm missing some contrast. a lot actually. right now i dont notice too much of the shading, except on the belly and back leg

and some slightly brighter(saturated) colours would make it look better too imho

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Yar
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Posted: 29 October 2006 at 12:04pm

Originally posted by Artisan

a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it...

Whoa...great idea!
I was also thinking, along those lines, that she looks pretty tired/remorseful with her face in her arm. So, I was picturing the dead body behind her of someone she didn't want to spear, but had too. Maybe a lover/rival fighter who stood in the way of some greater purpose she had to fulfill.

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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Topic: Adarias' Lines Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:02pm
	I'm lacking a name at the moment.. and have recently found a giant likeing to fills..

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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 26 October 2006 at 1:13pm
	kind of grey colours, but nice shading so far
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 27 October 2006 at 3:11am
	*Originally posted by snader* kind of grey colours, but nice shading so far Noted, I've introduced some browns and dark reds, for the cloth.

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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 27 October 2006 at 7:17am
	I remember this lineart . Looking quite good so far, though the white on the skin seems a little confusing, perhaps try a more fleshed out highlight? Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. Edited by EyeCraft - 27 October 2006 at 7:17am
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 27 October 2006 at 9:25am
	*Originally posted by EyeCraft* Looking quite good so far, though the white on the skin seems a little confusing, perhaps try a more fleshed out highlight? I see your point : I might re-use the white if I make the highlights more noticable.

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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 27 October 2006 at 8:37pm
	*Originally posted by Skull* I see your point : She has 2 points, way up firm and high.... Nice work so far but I wouldent use white the do the highlights....of course that my opinion I could be wrong Edited by Psychotic_Carp - 27 October 2006 at 10:05pm
	got game?
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 27 October 2006 at 11:45pm
	I love this lineart. You're doing a good coloring job so far. I hope you consider a BG/setting for her. If not, its cool. TIP: White and Black are your enemies (more often than not).
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 28 October 2006 at 12:20am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* I love this lineart. You're doing a good coloring job so far. I hope you consider a BG/setting for her. If not, its cool. TIP: White and Black are your enemies (more often than not). . Yeah, black was much too dark, so I've changed that. A background is a nice idea, but I'm not sure what I'd do, if anything.

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Artisan Commander Joined: 29 August 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 219	Posted: 28 October 2006 at 4:34am
	a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it...
	I like shiny things, i do indeed.
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 28 October 2006 at 5:05am
	*Originally posted by Artisan* a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it... Gasp - that'll be cruel.. but awesome looking. I think I'll leave out a background, for now anway. Finished piece:

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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 28 October 2006 at 7:05am
	i'm missing some contrast. a lot actually. right now i dont notice too much of the shading, except on the belly and back leg and some slightly brighter(saturated) colours would make it look better too imho
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Yar Midshipman Joined: 25 August 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44	Posted: 29 October 2006 at 12:04pm
	*Originally posted by Artisan* a coloseum as if she was in the centre so you see people sitting around her.... then you could add some dead lions if you felt like going for it... Whoa...great idea! I was also thinking, along those lines, that she looks pretty tired/remorseful with her face in her arm. So, I was picturing the dead body behind her of someone she didn't want to spear, but had too. Maybe a lover/rival fighter who stood in the way of some greater purpose she had to fulfill.
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