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Hey guys! Tell me what you think!

http://www.freewebs.com/flyzzz/evilcarnival5.png

Would an admin please insert this image to my post? I cant do it, when I click the image button my internet explorer shuts down. Its bugged for me I must have a virus. Thanks alot :)

EDIT by jalonso: OK, but do what Aleiav said below next time, k, k.

Crit me good guys !!!

Edited by jalonso - 29 November 2006 at 9:43pm

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JerryPie Rear Admiral Joined: 01 October 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 232	Topic: !!!!!~~~EVIL CARNIVAL~~~!!!!! Posted: 29 November 2006 at 6:17pm
	Hey guys! Tell me what you think! http://www.freewebs.com/flyzzz/evilcarnival5.png Would an admin please insert this image to my post? I cant do it, when I click the image button my internet explorer shuts down. Its bugged for me I must have a virus. Thanks alot :) EDIT by jalonso: OK, but do what Aleiav said below next time, k, k. Crit me good guys !!! Edited by jalonso - 29 November 2006 at 9:43pm
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 29 November 2006 at 9:00pm
	you can do it yourself by using the image BB code: [IMG]http://imagelink.com/image.gif[/IMG] without the * Edited by Aleiav - 29 November 2006 at 9:01pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 29 November 2006 at 9:46pm
	Looks like you worked hard on this. I only find the lightsource (and lack of) is all over the place. The pixel on the whole is interesting.
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JerryPie Rear Admiral Joined: 01 October 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 232	Posted: 29 November 2006 at 10:15pm
	thanks :p
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Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 29 November 2006 at 11:21pm
	This piece is going in the right direction. As jalonso said, add a lightsource to give the piece more depht. That clown is scary ;_;
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Toonses Seaman Joined: 26 November 2006 Location: Iceland Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 29 November 2006 at 11:36pm
	haha, I love the expression on both their faces. Excellent work, just needs a little tweaking, as the others ahve said, and I think it's ready for submission :D
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JerryPie Rear Admiral Joined: 01 October 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 232	Posted: 30 November 2006 at 5:39am
	Thanks guys... Would anyone mind helping me create a good pallete for the guy in teh foreground? I cant seem to make his flesh look like its matching its sarroundings.. I can adjust lighting after I find the right color scheme. If you cant, thanks for viewing. :)
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 30 November 2006 at 7:03am
	Well well, this is quite alot of work! The front guy's face is way too bright for such a dim scene, its really standing out and distracting. Reduce the values of all the colours for his face. With the shading of the wood, on the fence specifically, you are adding highlight tones from panel to panel, but not removing/cutting down on shadow tones as you do so, which simply makes the texture of the wood "deeper" in appearance, rather than convincingly increasing the brightness of the plank. The white wood panel that is broken by the window the clown is leering through is another place this is happening. Basically im saying you have a transition of highlight throughout the image, but no transition of shadow, and this is washing out the depth. And the rooves (sp?) have no shadow or depth at all, so yeah a global lightsouce really needs to be worked into it. The mountains in the background could use more work, too, define their form in terms of a lightsource and shade accordingly. Edited by EyeCraft - 30 November 2006 at 7:03am
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