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Quote skeddles Replybullet Topic: A couple WIPs, please help
    Posted: 27 November 2006 at 4:33pm
1. here is myself as an RPG character, thats for a school project. This is my first try, so please give me tons of c+c and help.
2. just a line art of a lighthouse, gonna add windows to the top.
3.Purple bunny. second is probobly better. is there any way i can improve?
 
please dont look and leave, COMMENT!
 
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Quote patsfan708 Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 9:11am
they're better than my rock
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Quote JerryPie Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 12:11pm
The rabbits colors merge to much..Try and do it with 4 colors instead of 5 since the picture is so small. It isnt to bad..maybe add a body and it will look cooler.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 12:55pm

the 1st rabbit or the second ?the second i tried to contrast them more.

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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 2:45pm
I dissagree with Flyguy, i think the colours you picked all have their place in the picture. The second one is definetely an improvement on the first in my eyes, but could be seen as being a bit dark (the white background doesn't help). Perhaps have a go at some different palettes to see which you like best. Be brave!
 
As for the lineart, i like it, although the ears look a bit odd, especially the upright one, which has a large blob at the end.. :)
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 3:48pm
@larwick, i knoticed that too lol
what do you guys think of the sprite?
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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 5:40pm
Your sprite kind of looks like a little rag doll (probably the feet most of all that make it seem so - they look like they are dangling, rather than on solid ground). It also looks like it is wearing a corset [as in the waist seems too thin]. His clothes also seem to be suffering from a bit of pillow shading.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2006 at 11:34pm
1- rpg, is cute but the indent on the waist is wierd looking
2- lighthouse? looks more like a ...
3- 2nd bunny better

Originally posted by patsfan708

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2006 at 2:21am
Originally posted by jalonso


2- lighthouse? looks more like a ...


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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2006 at 5:01pm
ok firstly:screw forget about the lighthouse.
 
and heres my update:better?als which feet?
 
also:i am trying to make a cliffish thing. sorta like this http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/moon_lit_2.png
but a frontal veiw. i tried sketching it(on paint, but it didnt come out oo good)any one else wanna give it a try?


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2006 at 8:39pm
Feet on the right look better.
Try this if you wish for a more proportionate character, if not ignore ;)
Feet thinner by 1 pixel - 2 pixels high instead of 3
Pants longer by 2 pixels - at the knees and delete those 2 white pixels (boys don't have thin waists like that)
Shorten shirt by 1 pixel - at the waist
Lenghten the arms by 3 pixels - at the elbow
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 6:56pm
im working on the rabbit pallette...either of these appeal to you?

now does this look better?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:41pm
looks much more betterer than what you had cept maybe the shoes you had before looked cuter/betterst

bunnie completorated

finish the condom lookin one, XD
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:44pm
ITS A FREAKIN LIGHTHOUSE!
lolXD

and which bunnie pallette do i use?
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 2:02pm
i want the sprite to look as good as if a pro did it, what else can i do?
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 05 December 2006 at 8:34am
bump
 
twas almost on page 2
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 08 December 2006 at 2:54pm
are you really gonna make me post 4 times?

lets not make it 5. just answer me.
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 08 December 2006 at 3:45pm
Generally we respond better to updates than bumps. Bumps tend to annoy most people, actually. And if you must bump, do it more than 1-3 days after the last post.

RPG is numberwang.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 08 December 2006 at 3:47pm
everytime it had gotton to page 2. and my question remeain unanswered.
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 08 December 2006 at 4:43pm

I suggest you lighten the dark parts of the brown bunny and use that. Also, it's better to let a single topic die than to let others' respect for you suffer that fate. At least try to bump with updates on other parts in the future.


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