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skeddles
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![]() 2. just a line art of a lighthouse, gonna add windows to the top.
3.Purple bunny. second is probobly better. is there any way i can improve?
please dont look and leave, COMMENT!
*may add more*
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patsfan708
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they're better than my rock
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JerryPie
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The rabbits colors merge to much..Try and do it with 4 colors instead of 5 since the picture is so small. It isnt to bad..maybe add a body and it will look cooler.
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skeddles
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the 1st rabbit or the second ?the second i tried to contrast them more. |
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Larwick
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I dissagree with Flyguy, i think the colours you picked all have their place in the picture. The second one is definetely an improvement on the first in my eyes, but could be seen as being a bit dark (the white background doesn't help). Perhaps have a go at some different palettes to see which you like best. Be brave!
As for the lineart, i like it, although the ears look a bit odd, especially the upright one, which has a large blob at the end.. :)
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skeddles
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@larwick, i knoticed that too lol
what do you guys think of the sprite?
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thesalus
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Your sprite kind of looks like a little rag doll (probably the feet most of all that make it seem so - they look like they are dangling, rather than on solid ground). It also looks like it is wearing a corset [as in the waist seems too thin]. His clothes also seem to be suffering from a bit of pillow shading.
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jalonso
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1- rpg, is cute but the indent on the waist is wierd looking
2- lighthouse? looks more like a ... 3- 2nd bunny better Originally posted by patsfan708 they're better than my rock Sense of humor and a 'pats' fan. Will you marry me? ![]() |
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Aleiav
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Originally posted by jalonso 2- lighthouse? looks more like a ... bullet. |
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skeddles
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ok firstly:
and heres my update:
![]() also:i am trying to make a cliffish thing. sorta like this http://www.pixeljoint.com/files/icons/full/moon_lit_2.png but a frontal veiw. i tried sketching it(on paint, but it didnt come out oo good)any one else wanna give it a try? Edited by skeddles - 01 December 2006 at 7:58pm |
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jalonso
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Feet on the right look better.
Try this if you wish for a more proportionate character, if not ignore ;) Feet thinner by 1 pixel - 2 pixels high instead of 3 Pants longer by 2 pixels - at the knees and delete those 2 white pixels (boys don't have thin waists like that) Shorten shirt by 1 pixel - at the waist Lenghten the arms by 3 pixels - at the elbow |
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skeddles
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jalonso
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![]() bunnie completorated finish the condom lookin one, XD |
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skeddles
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ITS A FREAKIN LIGHTHOUSE!
lolXD and which bunnie pallette do i use? |
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skeddles
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i want the sprite to look as good as if a pro did it, what else can i do?
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skeddles
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bump
twas almost on page 2
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skeddles
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are you really gonna make me post 4 times?
lets not make it 5. just answer me. |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Generally we respond better to updates than bumps. Bumps tend to annoy most people, actually. And if you must bump, do it more than 1-3 days after the last post.
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skeddles
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everytime it had gotton to page 2. and my question remeain unanswered.
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Monkey 'o Doom
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I suggest you lighten the dark parts of the brown bunny and use that. Also, it's better to let a single topic die than to let others' respect for you suffer that fate. At least try to bump with updates on other parts in the future. |
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