Pixel Joint Forum: 'tis a mockup, my dear sirs

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Wouldst thou be kind enough to giveth me some crit?
Yes, I know, it's full of laziness and all.
But the deadline for the entries is tomorrow (it's for the tourney at Pixeltendo, dear sirs), and...
DAMN PROCRASTINATION!

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rabidbaboy Midshipman Joined: 25 July 2006 Location: Philippines Online Status: Offline Posts: 68	Topic: 'tis a mockup, my dear sirs Posted: 21 December 2006 at 11:07pm
	Wouldst thou be kind enough to giveth me some crit? Yes, I know, it's full of laziness and all. But the deadline for the entries is tomorrow (it's for the tourney at Pixeltendo, dear sirs), and... DAMN PROCRASTINATION!
	"baboy" is Filipino for "pig"
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 21 December 2006 at 11:58pm
	Desaturate the clouds. Add some vines to cover the errors on the brick wall to hide some of the flaws. Add a touch of contrast to the platforms sa that they stand out a bit more. Fix the font to something more balanced and better spaced. TADA! hurry, hurry
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 22 December 2006 at 7:04am
	I like it.. The tree and background are very nice, as is the HUD. I'd just suggest giving the font a little work, aswell as making the stone wall a little bolder in it's outline. Still, very impressive work.

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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 22 December 2006 at 1:58pm
	I think the clouds are fine with saturation they just need to be lightened. Saturation is how much pigment is in a color not how light it is. I'm not being an ass Jal just pointing something out. Edited by Pixel_Outlaw - 22 December 2006 at 1:59pm

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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 22 December 2006 at 11:16pm
	My bad, you are right. It was a hurry, hurry, thing. The man has a comp in one day. Cut me some slack, grinch
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 23 December 2006 at 12:11am
	no worries. :)

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 23 December 2006 at 8:39am
	I'd make the foreground a little more saturated than the background so that it pops out to the eye more, which makes the game easier to play and focus on.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 23 December 2006 at 11:17am
	the tiles and stuff are too detailed in comparison to the sprite
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