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Quote zi-double Replybullet Topic: machinery "Fly Accelerator" ...
    Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:30am

I want to make some machinery for "mech scene" ...

Name is - "fly accelerator" because haven't arms ...

I want to be as motorcycle with one pilot and one traveller as in Star Wars :)

I think red light are best choice, but I'm not sure !

32 colours and non animated for now ...

 

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Quote Monstara Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:33am
wow this is cool.
only thing that bothers me is the stance of the front guy - his bottom should be farther back on the seat.
yes, red lights look  best IMO.
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2005 at 12:35am
Red lights are the best choice, but if you are gonna animate it, you should make them blink from red to green, IMO.

Great work so far!
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Quote zi-double Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2005 at 1:26am

Thanks Monstara I repair pilot :)

... and I think too for Red lights Ensellitis ... thanks :)

 

 

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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 12 July 2005 at 8:21am

This is a cool start zi... the only thing that looks off to me is the flame coming from the back of the vehicle.  I'm sure once you start animating the flame will look better but right now it looks odd.

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Quote zi-double Replybullet Posted: 13 July 2005 at 11:30pm

thanks sedge ...

 

just one new /I can't say/ machine from last 2 days :)

for name maybe "air-strip" :)

In front part need more work ...

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 12:34am
Wow, it's looking great...  I can't really see anything to add, maybe some kind of dritness?  
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Quote ryan-gfx Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:01am
Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :)

You are getting better and better, bud
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Quote zi-double Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:33am

I see some mistakes and edit "air-strip" Ensellitis

Thanks ryan always glad to read your comments ... and I just try to be better

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 4:55am
Are you gonna make some kind of game out of these?
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Quote Xero Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 6:53am

Originally posted by ryan-gfx

Zi, these are encredibly well done, like something out of metal slug :)

You are getting better and better, bud

Agreed completely ryan, your work is getting even better zi, good work :) But I always try to find something to crit, no matter how small so... 2 things, the first, on the back of the fly accellerator, there flames coming out of a 'hole', it doesnt look like a hole because the lighting is placed on the upper part, making it look more like a tiny sphere.. just a tiny crit but still. And the landing thing, on the back triangular things, theres shine on the forwards side of the front most one, but not on the forwards side of the back one? Again a small crit, but I hope it helps! Just goes to show your gettin so good its hard to crit you :P

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Quote Core_12 Replybullet Posted: 14 July 2005 at 1:17pm
Nice style. The design of the air-strip is pretty bizarre
Reality is for people who lack imagination
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Quote zi-double Replybullet Posted: 16 July 2005 at 4:48am

No Ensellitis I make them for my pleasure as always

Xero thanks for very usefull and detailed comment ... I repair my mistakes and this crit isn't "tiny"

Bizarre like in "Return of the Jedy" Core_12 ... nothing commontly just like idea ...

here is opponent part ... She is one split part from mech ...

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Quote ..::Naso::.. Replybullet Posted: 16 July 2005 at 9:19am
Dam Zi-double, you are real good at this!!!!!!! =D
This would be so kool if u make it into a game or a animated scen or something =P
Nice Job
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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 16 July 2005 at 12:32pm
That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place.
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Quote kiwidesign Replybullet Posted: 16 July 2005 at 5:01pm

Originally posted by sedgemonkey

That's a superb piece, but the flames in the back kind of imply that it's moving not bouncing in place.

yep

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