no, not 300 mockups, you silly person. mockups of 300 =P

for my portfolio i wanna do some mockups, and i wanted to start with a 300 fighting, DS game
this will me the menu, i feel about the anatomy though =(

Edited by snader - 05 April 2007 at 3:05pm

If thats king lionydos ( spelling?) I think he need more beard and his always calm..... this one seems furios..

very nice though.. maybe showing the spartan sign on the shield would be nice....

I can't argue the pixeling... but thats what I want to see more of :D

*** EDIT ***

Maybe some more background soldiers... just small tiny black figures in the sunset....

//Albin


Edited by Serendor - 05 April 2007 at 3:29pm

game over screen. i like this one a lot more, and i think im going to redo the main menu pretty much completely, to make it fit this

some mockups of a game yes, not an actual game...-

Hi Snader,

Hope I can give you some advice on your pieces.
They look very good.

What I find strange is the lighting of the first piece. There appears
to be light coming from multiple directions. Maybe there is a fire on the right of the character, but then the body color should have more of a red-glare.
It could also be that there is a mirror in the armor that he is holding, but
it isn´t that common to be there

The body looks ok to me, the muscles in the stomach should be down
a bit and they shouldn´t be pointing out like you have.

I think his nose should be a bit longer and currently it looks
like he has something in his mouth. Maybe you can make a
gesture with his mouth instead of the current pose?

The hand looks a bit odd as well and I have attempted an edit:



You made some highlight on the iron at his wrest, but then there
would be one or two highlights on the bottom of the arm as well.
When you hold something that is not that big, the thumb usualy
is a little down under the first finger.
The edit would still need work, but hopefully I made it just a little better?


The second piece is my favorite too. Except for the hand-action
of the attacker. That looks weird. Almost if he is killing himself.
I'm not even sure about what hit is that he is holding!?

Hopefully you can use one or two of my advices.


Best regards from

M.E.

AWESOME movie. :) looking good so far.