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Setzer
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concept art I drew up
quickly while watching wayne's world II at 4am. The game idea
is actually a rather old one I had, (some of the very old sprites in my
gallery were for it)
![]() ![]() there are alot of things wrong with it, so I figured I'd post it here for c+c Edited by Setzer - 18 April 2007 at 12:59am |
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M.E.
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Hello Setzer,
Just learning a lot myself so I'm maybe not the one you want listening too, but since I do have some opinions on it I rather share so it may help you with the sprite. Firstly I realy like the sneekers!! What bothers me is that the gun is a black thing with no shadow/highlight on it. His hair looks a bit strange. Maybe use a different color? What is it that he is wearing around his chest? Is that a halter? If so, it sticks out strangely and usually the halter is around his armpit. The stretched out hand with the gun seems a bit odd as well my guess is that the elbow needs to shift, or to rise the whole arm a pixel or two. Hopefully you value my response and maybe one or two advices will help you a bit. Best regards from M.E. |
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alkaline
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his head is too far forward. i agree with the gun and hair.
his arm is too short as well. |
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Setzer
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hair = not hair, I was going for those pilot goggle-helmet things (the goggles do nothing)
I hadn't done much on the gun because I didn't know where I was going with it the helmet is now purple to set it apart, I don't know what color I want it update |
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PixelSnader
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might i suggest brown leather? the goggles could use some more contrast to show they are goggles i think
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