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Setzer
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Quote Setzer Replybullet Topic: sprites
    Posted: 13 April 2007 at 1:03pm
concept art I drew up quickly while watching wayne's world II at 4am. The game idea is actually a rather old one I had, (some of the very old sprites in my gallery were for it)

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there are alot of things wrong with it, so I figured I'd post it here for c+c



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M.E.
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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 15 April 2007 at 11:13pm
Hello Setzer,

Just learning a lot myself so I'm maybe not the one
you want listening too, but since I do have some
opinions on it I rather share so it may help you with the
sprite.

Firstly I realy like the sneekers!!

What bothers me is that the gun is a black
thing with no shadow/highlight on it.
His hair looks a bit strange. Maybe use a different color?
What is it that he is wearing around his chest? Is that a halter?
If so, it sticks out strangely and usually the halter is around
his armpit.

The stretched out hand with the gun seems a bit odd as well
my guess is that the elbow needs to shift, or to rise the whole
arm a pixel or two.

Hopefully you value my response and maybe one or two advices
will help you a bit.

Best regards from

M.E.

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Quote alkaline Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2007 at 10:00am
his head is too far forward. i agree with the gun and hair.

his arm is too short as well.
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Quote Setzer Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2007 at 12:58am
hair = not hair, I was going for those pilot goggle-helmet things (the goggles do nothing)

I hadn't done much on the gun because I didn't know where I was going with it

the helmet is now purple to set it apart, I don't know what color I want it

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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2007 at 2:48am
might i suggest brown leather? the goggles could use some more contrast to show they are goggles i think
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