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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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I usually don't post WIPs, but this time decided to, both because I'm
having some trouble with this, and to see whether posting it as a WIP
would help
![]() I have one of those knives and I love it. I am having some trouble with the blade, tried a thousand versions of it - with and without dithering, etc. I think when I get satisfied with the results I'll animate it. and, btw, holy crap! Look at that thing http://www.wenger-knife.ch/htdocs/images/Pictures/surdoue.jp g Edited by Monstara |
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Ensellitis
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I think the knife needs a little more of a point. And the slot
where it comes out of looks a little to dark for my taste. THis
thing looks awsome though. And that knife you linked, that is
crazy, I would never use all of that...
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Update: watcha think of the blade now? Not much sharper, but I'm having
trouble at this scale, and the blade's edges have to be round, sh*t.
Lightened up the slot, too, but that meant introducing another color. Worst of all, the original blades taper towards the handle, but no way I could do that. ![]() yah, and I replaced the pic at photobucket, so the original post is also with the updated pic. Stupid. btw you think the blade could use some reflections/highlights? Edited by Monstara |
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Xion Night
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 67 |
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Good so far.
Add more contrast to the blade. Make the darks darker and all that jazz. And to make it look like it tapers toward the base, just make the outline a bit darker when it gets close to the handle. ...And woah. Crazy knife. |
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Core_12
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 13 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35 |
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Nice.
The plastic part could have a bit more of a reflection. |
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Reality is for people who lack imagination
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kiwidesign
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 24 June 2005 Location: Italy Online Status: Offline Posts: 95 |
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I LOVE it, really... nice idea |
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"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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PixelSnader
Commander ![]() ![]() Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
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this might sound weird, but try to not have a lighter line on the bottom side of the knife.. see, shading is used to make things appear to have volume, so maybe, just maybe, if you left out the shading.. it wouldnt look as thick? and in the picture, the knife is pointier too, and slimmer too |
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kiwidesign
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(Monstara, when you update your knife please don't overwrite it, so that we can see progress |
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"She doesn't quite chop his head off. She makes a Pez dispenser out of him"
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Snader, I see what you mean. I was trying to make that 'bevel' the
knife has right behind the sharp side of the blade. But I see it is not
working.
I will increase the contrast of the blade, maybe this will make it clear. Edited by Monstara |
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Edit:
Certainly better, but I still have doubts about the blade. I would really appreciate comments. New ![]() Old ![]() and, btw for the body -- my knife's handle is matte, though I've seen glossy ones. Edited by Monstara |
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Second edit:
What do you think of the white reflection? ![]() |
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Aleiav
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I think you've done a good job so far, very cool. :) I'd suggest a highlight on the red part of the knife. 1 pixel on whichever side you think is best. Sort of an isometric type highlight might make things interesting. :)
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Here, I tried a highlight. Unfortunately, it meant adding in one more colour, cause white by itself was too bright.
![]() waddaya think. I wanna finish this off, finally :D |
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Ensellitis
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That makes it look alot better. IMO, it's pretty much done
=) Infact, you inspired me to do a tool as well, I think I will
post it as soon as I get a bit more done
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Monstara
Commander ![]() Joined: 01 July 2005 Location: Bulgaria Online Status: Offline Posts: 179 |
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Cool. Thanks all for the C&C. This knife is oficially... done
Ensellitis - glad to inspire a fellow artist lol. That's what the forum's about. |
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