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marilii
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Quote marilii Replybullet Topic: Porcupine
    Posted: 03 May 2007 at 11:38am
What can I say. It's a porcupine. Any c+c extremely welcome
 
 
10 colours at the moment.


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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 03 May 2007 at 12:56pm
Hi Marilii,

What kind of porcupine is it? The one with stripped colors on his
spikes? If so , maybe you could emphasize them a bit.

Also, when looking at some google pictures I noticed that the
face is fuller than yours. Thicker. Sorry if I don't find the right
words.
The top seems to be trimmed off as well. Try to make a more
unevenly structure like you did at the tail.


Good luck!

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Quote halfDemon Replybullet Posted: 03 May 2007 at 7:49pm
His other hind leg should be visible, and you can definitely lower the color count.
Every pixel counts, even the dead ones.
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Quote marilii Replybullet Posted: 04 May 2007 at 10:22am

Thank you both!

I made the other hind leg visible, changed the face and tried to emphasize the spikes a bit. I also managed to get the colour count down to 8 (including transparency)

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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2007 at 12:30am
Hello Marilii,

The top is much better, as well as the face; but I failed to see the emphasize on the spikes. Maybe you can exagerate the darks a little bit.

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