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C&C please...

I'm getting pretty tired of cutting renders for signatures, so I tried pixelling one stock I found in the Internet. Now I'm just using two colors, but if you think they're not good for the image then tell me so I can change it.

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Which one is better? The one on the left almost copies the ref image on the coloring and the right side only uses two colors. Needs more contrast or something? I'm not sure...


Edited by computeruser28 - 21 May 2007 at 11:01pm

I think the lineart is sketchy and confusing, so a lot of the problems you're going to have with this piece will stem from that. Maybe clearing it up so we can tell what exactly it is when we look at it rather than guessing.

I know it's a girl jumping or something... but it's not clear enough to get immediately, IMHO.

to be honest I didnt look at the ref last time (didnt notice it)  but, I'd suggest you turn the foot the other way, it'll be more readable then imo

Don't forget to add the other skate so we know exactly where the second foot is, it will make it a lot easier to tell what pose she is in. Even if it is just a little bit then cut off like the your reference.


Edited by Noburo - 23 May 2007 at 10:11am

the legs and torso should be way longer