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Burak
Seaman ![]() Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
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ok guys, ive started making sprites for my mmorpg, theres something wrong i just cant put my finger on it :S, C+C please :) |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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no heads :p
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Burak
Seaman ![]() Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
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lol does the body look done so i can begin the head lol.
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jalonso
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hehe,
These are the details I see could use some fixing: In the walking away mode the feet just thin out. Because the toes are so rounded in the other views this version will look odd in animation. Use the walking forward outline and then bring the heel down. In the side view the legs are not the smoothest (maybe the clothing will fix that :/ In the rear view the base has no butt which looks just like the front. Maybe make the blue undies more butt-ish. |
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dragonrc
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 May 2006 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 294 |
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why is the body pointing left and right randomly in the side view?
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Burak
Seaman ![]() Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
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lol because i got confused, its a 8 frame walk, and 4 are flipped on side it got mixed and 5 are made and 3 are flipped :S
thanks for the info, i will work on what you said :) |
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theguy
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 November 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 417 |
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transparent-afied
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Di0xygen
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 401 |
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@theguy, whats the use of making it transparent, I really dont see the point of that edit. It's a sprite sheet, theres no need to have it transparent.
I think the big problem i see is that he looks like a 3 years old boy, he has no shoulder, he has gigantic feets, and very small arms. Maybe givning it a more mature shape would help a lot. |
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c==3
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Burak
Seaman ![]() Joined: 09 September 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 23 |
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Ok heres a update, some updates, fixed feet with help from a friend: Adlin, and underwear, introduced a but :) hehehe.
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Babunar
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
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The feet on the bottom row are still HUGE....
Also, make the shoulders a bit squarer. I like it though, it has potential. |
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Don't take life so seriously. You're not going to get out of it alive.
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Serendor
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 27 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 79 |
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Think it would be nice to show a head attached to the body
much easier to help you then I think... //Albin |
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Babunar
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8 |
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You've still got a left-facer in the rightmost box of the bottom row... Flip it quick! :P
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Don't take life so seriously. You're not going to get out of it alive.
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leel
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
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im sorry i dont have time to read the whole thing so maybe this was already adressed, but.. why aren't the knees bent.. like.. ever?
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