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Quote Burak Replybullet Topic: (WIP) SPRITES 4 MMORPG, CC :)
    Posted: 09 June 2007 at 10:51am


ok guys, ive started making sprites for my mmorpg, theres something wrong i just cant put my finger on it :S, C+C please :)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:19am
no heads :p
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Quote Burak Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:20am
lol does the body look done so i can begin the head lol.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:24am
hehe,
These are the details I see could use some fixing:
In the walking away mode the feet just thin out. Because the toes are so rounded in the other views this version will look odd in animation. Use the walking forward outline and then bring the heel down.
In the side view the legs are not the smoothest (maybe the clothing will fix that :/
In the rear view the base has no butt which looks just like the front. Maybe make the blue undies more butt-ish.
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Quote dragonrc Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:27am
why is the body pointing left and right randomly in the side view?
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Quote Burak Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 11:36am
lol because i got confused, its a 8 frame walk, and 4 are flipped on side it got mixed and 5 are made and 3 are flipped :S

thanks for the info, i will work on what you said :)
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Quote theguy Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:32pm
transparent-afied
 
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Quote Di0xygen Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:55pm
@theguy, whats the use of making it transparent, I really dont see the point of that edit. It's a sprite sheet, theres no need to have it transparent.

I think the big problem i see is that he looks like a 3 years old boy, he has no shoulder, he has gigantic feets, and very small arms. Maybe givning it a more mature shape would help a lot.
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Quote Burak Replybullet Posted: 09 June 2007 at 12:57pm
Ok heres a update, some updates, fixed feet with help from a friend: Adlin, and underwear, introduced a but :) hehehe.
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Quote Babunar Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 11:16am
The feet on the bottom row are still HUGE....

Also, make the shoulders a bit squarer.

I like it though, it has potential.
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Quote Serendor Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2007 at 3:29pm
Think it would be nice to show a head attached to the body

much easier to help you then I think...

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Quote Babunar Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2007 at 1:57am
You've still got a left-facer in the rightmost box of the bottom row... Flip it quick! :P
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 12 June 2007 at 4:56pm
im sorry i dont have time to read the whole thing so maybe this was already adressed, but.. why aren't the knees bent.. like.. ever?
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