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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Topic: Lizard.
    Posted: 15 June 2007 at 5:27pm

I am fairly new at this style of pixel art and I need a lot of feedback so that I can improve. Anyway here is the lizard.

Feedback would be great, thanks.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2007 at 7:03pm
Not bad shading thus far... I think the bottom of the body should have a little more shadow if the head's so big and floating over it.
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2007 at 7:06pm
Thanks I will try to fix that when I get the time.
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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2007 at 12:59pm

After you shade the body with the head shadow, you might want to up the contrast on the rest of the body.  In particular, add a bit more darkness to the scales in the shadowed areas.  Looks good otherwise though. :)
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 3:28pm
Thank you. I will do that also.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 3:55pm
how about reducing the saturation of the top green a few points??
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 3:56pm
The second brightest green?
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 4:02pm
the most one.
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Quote Excalibur Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2007 at 4:05pm
Will Do. Thanks for the feedback. I might not get ut updated for a few days because I am working on my contest sprite bet I will do it.
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