The ear(s) should be risen, nostrils...  Not so big like a pig (rhyme time right there)  And the lip looks like a worm.  Try not making the lips so bright.  The eyes need a bit of work too.  

I am reluctant to help you (not that my help is really anything to be sought :P) unless you plan to stick with this piece and make it something great. Phrases like "i know i need to get the shading and hair right anything else or just the shading and hair" make me think you're still in a huge hurry to just shove this into the gallery as fast as you can.

It's a funny expression and an interesting perspective, and with a lot of patience, time, and effort I think it could be fantastic, but right now it is nowhere near being ready for submission. You have to be prepared to put in the hours.

You've got to get a grip on anatomy. Ears are supposed to be level with the eyes. The lips aren't shaped realistically and there's a random line on the left(our left)side of her face. It needs a bit of work but it's a pretty good start.

*cough* HIS face... But yes, that's another problem. Unless you're wearing lipstick, the lips are way too red. It makes you look like a girl.

EDIT: Also, take a good, long look in the mirror and ask yourself if your nose really looks like that. (and I'm not talking about the nostril holes, which have already been addressed) The bridge is way too wide and there's no definition of the nostrils.


Edited by Hatch - 19 July 2007 at 9:47am

Sorry about that, the lips were so red that it gave a feminen look!
:P

One last thing:

Don't dither anything.

Just start blocking in rough shading. If you need a new shade, just add a color to your palette. It is way, way, way, way too early to dither.

Here it ios, i know you said no dithering, but i did it then u said it so i could'nt be bothered changing it.