Alright, this needs revision before gallery will accept it; I've never done this before (posted a WIP for crits, that is), so let's WIP this thing and see what we get for results...









Thanks, y'all :)




Edited by Tadashi Blossom - 22 July 2007 at 12:11am

Hello Tadashi Blossom,

The shoulder-line appears to go from left up to right down, but
the breasts and the rest down have a frontal view.

I think you aim for a side view so my advice would be to make
a diagonal of the breasts making the left one (her right)
smaller and more upwards. The shadow/shade on the
left should be made smaller so that her body 'faces'
the correct way.
Maybe you should also look at her dress being kind of
stiff. ( = Like a carton box)

Good luck with it!

Best regards from

M.E.