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sweytie_piy
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Quote sweytie_piy Replybullet Topic: Little Cloth Man
    Posted: 26 July 2007 at 10:53pm
Hi!
 
Well, this is my second attempt at pixel art, and I thought I might try to try out my dithering skills (or lack thereof). This little guy is meant to be made out of material or something. He's going to be holding a light of some sort, and as well as that light source, I think I'm going to have a softer light source coming from the same direction.
 
I realise he is headless at the moment... but that's because I can't get the shape right
 
C&C is much appreciated!
 
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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 26 July 2007 at 11:15pm
Hello Swytie_piy,


Nice contrasting colors. The figure reminds me of piglet from Pooh.
First of all I suggest you check out the outline.
Apart from the feet that really don't hold that much structure
they are also not in line with the rest of the body.
Also the hand/arm can have more weight to it as it
is kind of a thick line at the moment.
You might consider bending the tip of the arm (just like a hand)
around the stick. And while you at it, please fix the tip so
that the stick is not showing through

It is best to do the line art of everything = also the head before
doing shading/coloring etc. Because everything relates to
eachother.
The shadow of the head will also effect the body etc...

Looking forward to see the head !

Best regards from

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