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InfernoMan.EXE
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Quote InfernoMan.EXE Replybullet Topic: Cheese Logo
    Posted: 29 August 2007 at 1:24pm
Now:

When I started:

Comments? C+C? Edits are mucho appreciated!



Edited by InfernoMan.EXE - 29 August 2007 at 7:05pm
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 August 2007 at 1:33pm
It looks very nice and clean!
But if you want suggestions from me:
You could try to highlight some lines, maybe thats better, maybe its not...
for the open hole, I would not use thick lines again, it looks weird, and for the largest hole I would change the shading a bit.. doesnt look very realistic now..
and some AA on the middle line :)
But it looks great! Really!
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Quote thesalus Replybullet Posted: 29 August 2007 at 2:59pm
I hope you don't mind, but I made a little edit of two of the holes on your cheese wedge.


One thing I didn't like is that your air pockets didn't suggest spherical bubbles (which I'm assuming is the case in reality - I'm no cheesemaster). I tried to make them seem more spherical in my edit.

The other is the anti-aliasing that you currently have in place doesn't smooth out the lines very well.

But otherwise... lots of AA will help make it smooth.


Edited by thesalus - 29 August 2007 at 2:59pm
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Quote InfernoMan.EXE Replybullet Posted: 29 August 2007 at 6:28pm
Thank you a lot!
I will get working on the next update..
And yes..
The holes are there from air bubbles. They form in the cheese when it is made..
anyways...
EDIT:

Any more comments until I move on to my small cheese icon thingies?



Edited by InfernoMan.EXE - 29 August 2007 at 7:03pm
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Quote BlackEye Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2007 at 8:12am
the bubbles are formed by fart gas from bacterias
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Quote spartan_117 Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2007 at 11:52am
thank you for that enlightening biological explanation.
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