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Sovereign
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 October 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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![]() You see, I used to pixel. Used to, mind you. So I've practically forgotten every bleeding thing I've ever known about it.
I think. Well, here, rip this to shreds. ~_o Just don't say the girl's ugly because that's me, mates. Harhar.
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Sovereign
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 October 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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Thanks for your critique, and I tried working on a few things you told me... I think I haven't done it right. o_<![]() Edited by Sovereign - 05 October 2007 at 6:12pm |
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Sovereign
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 October 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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Edit;; Hmm, I fixed up a few things, the sleeves, and I did a tiled floor. - Very strange, innit? A tiled floor in the outdoors. = _ = I might change the way I made the clouds.
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leel
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make your font bigger please, it's very hard to read. Thanks
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Sovereign
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 October 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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Done and done. Sorry 'bout that. |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Originally posted by Sovereign
![]() Ok, this is a decent start. Since the figure is mostly stylistic I'm going to just give some ideas and let your personal style take over.
First you might consider adding some texture,unless you are going for a simple paper cutout look. The anatomy for the arms is too long if you are doing formal anatomy but again if this is part of your style then maybe you could add some shadow or perhaps some hint of a joint midarm. The lines of the shirt are not the same dark curves found in the other lines, you may consider revising them they seem to stand out the most. Some symmetry is missing between the arms and this may detract from the image as a whole. The clouds or mountains look decent but you may want to give them more form by adding some shadow and light. Some areas may have too much anti aliasing for some people you might consider this.
Good luck. ;)
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Sovereign
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 October 2007 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
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I added the image to the gallery to see if I could get more advice there as well; I did change a few things. The background I found too strange, and the shovel I removed. I also removed the shirt design and added an exclamation mark. Now the background looks like wallpaper, which honestly, it's good enough for me. I oddly like the noodle arms, but I'll see if I can imply joints, and yet still like it. Thanks.![]() |
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