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Fuzzyleaves
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    Posted: 18 December 2007 at 8:21am
THis needs revision! With what? I might rinkle the shirt, and change the shoes, But how else can i change it?
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Quote Wuuhuu Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2007 at 9:55am
Hmm.. give some shadows in his face maybe, and come light reflection at his glasses, etc.
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Quote NotSure Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2007 at 4:05pm
I know it is the style, but the square jaw does not suit a "Nerd". If you want to run with the nerd theme, pull the pants up much further, and add a pocket protector (it would not look out of place as a white handkerchief is often worn in the same pocket).
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 18 December 2007 at 9:18pm
the lack of AA in the Font compared to the Over AA'ed character appears to be the problem. not to mention that, even when it tries to mimic the vector style, its desing is a bit boring, and maybe could be improved here and there(i.e. square jaw thing mentioned above).

this is good, you just need to improve some details and that's all.   
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Quote Fuzzyleaves Replybullet Posted: 19 December 2007 at 11:43am
my horrible try at a reflection... will remove pink (soon to be trans)

Better?


Edited by Morgan cook - 19 December 2007 at 11:43am
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