Pixel Joint Forum: (WIP) Blob Party

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Wuuhuu
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Topic: (WIP) Blob Party
Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:21am

Well, I made this after seeing OMGFossil's open head bin blob and this came out, and I thought of posting it here before submitting it.

C&C please.

EDIT: Now I am going to make a blob party instead.

This is what I got yet, I know it is not the greatest, but tell me what to do more. I have no clue.

Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 11:09am

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Skull
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:37am

I think you've got too many colours in there..

The red at the bottom looks much too dark.

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Wuuhuu
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:41am

Yeah, I didnt notice, thanks, i'll fix that.
anything more?

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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:45am

You can easily remove two colours from the top. ^^

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Wuuhuu
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:46am

wow, I tried and it was all messed, every time i tried to pick a colour to the background to make it transparent at www.iaza.com, It just picked another colour from the blob! How come?

Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 4:47am

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volcom
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:10pm

i dunno why, be cool for like a slush despenser..made in 1min. I'd be cool to do something similar

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BlackDragon
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:25pm

Beware, long post ahead...

OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts.

Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything.
Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh.
Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made.
Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted.

"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie

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Wuuhuu
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 1:00pm

Originally posted by BlackDragon

Beware, long post ahead...

OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts.

Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything.
Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh.
Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made.
Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted.

Okey, I'll try to edit that guy right away(unless I get stopped).

EDIT:

I dont really know if I fixed the line art, but I liked it that way, and also,
I want the eyes like that, it gives it a feeling like they just been throwed them at the jelly. Cause it looks like jelly now xD

Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 1:12pm

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BlackDragon
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Posted: 21 December 2007 at 6:08pm

Some bad jaggies, thats all. The new lines kinda took away the "jellyness" of this guy though...

The eyes look better now because he is taller.

If another edit is in order I will be happy to do so.

"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie

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Wuuhuu
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Posted: 22 December 2007 at 2:59am

Go ahead. I'll try to fix it later today when I have time.

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Wuuhuu Seaman Joined: 02 September 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Topic: (WIP) Blob Party Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:21am
	Well, I made this after seeing OMGFossil's open head bin blob and this came out, and I thought of posting it here before submitting it. C&C please. EDIT: Now I am going to make a blob party instead. This is what I got yet, I know it is not the greatest, but tell me what to do more. I have no clue. Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 11:09am
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:37am
	I think you've got too many colours in there.. The red at the bottom looks much too dark.

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Wuuhuu Seaman Joined: 02 September 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:41am
	Yeah, I didnt notice, thanks, i'll fix that. anything more?
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xeroxz2k7 Midshipman Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:45am
	You can easily remove two colours from the top. ^^
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Wuuhuu Seaman Joined: 02 September 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 4:46am
	wow, I tried and it was all messed, every time i tried to pick a colour to the background to make it transparent at www.iaza.com, It just picked another colour from the blob! How come? Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 4:47am
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volcom Commander Joined: 17 August 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 272	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:10pm
	i dunno why, be cool for like a slush despenser..made in 1min. I'd be cool to do something similar
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 12:25pm
	Beware, long post ahead... OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts. Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything. Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh. Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made. Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted.
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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Wuuhuu Seaman Joined: 02 September 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 1:00pm
	*Originally posted by BlackDragon* Beware, long post ahead... OK, so here is my edit. There are many things changed here, so I will explain in parts. Lineart- This could be improved a bit. Since this is a slime and therefore a liquid, it should "flow" and have no jaggy lines or anything. Coloring- It sorta hurt my eyes, so I turned down the saturation. To make it more interesting, I added a slight hue shift. Instead of a "clean" color ramp, I went from Orange-Red-Purple. Some selout (changing outline color due to light) was added too. Also less colors, from 10 down to 6. You could prolly take out the black and make it 5, as it is a little harsh. Shading- Your shading was flat. I assume this lil guy is translucent, no? You can see for yourself the changes I made. Other stuff- AA'ed. Turned the eyes a bit, as it looked twisted. Okey, I'll try to edit that guy right away(unless I get stopped). EDIT: I dont really know if I fixed the line art, but I liked it that way, and also, I want the eyes like that, it gives it a feeling like they just been throwed them at the jelly. Cause it looks like jelly now xD Edited by Wuuhuu - 21 December 2007 at 1:12pm
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BlackDragon Commander Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 729	Posted: 21 December 2007 at 6:08pm
	Some bad jaggies, thats all. The new lines kinda took away the "jellyness" of this guy though... The eyes look better now because he is taller. If another edit is in order I will be happy to do so.
	"A little pain never hurt anyone." - Blueberry_Pie
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Wuuhuu Seaman Joined: 02 September 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27	Posted: 22 December 2007 at 2:59am
	Go ahead. I'll try to fix it later today when I have time.
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