Pixel Joint Forum: Room Project [Completed]

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   This is "THE Room"
[s](Please keep in mind that is is still a WIP and is far from being done)[/s]
CLICK HERE FOR THE FLASH ANIMATION OF THIS PROJECT!!!
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These are the different objects in progress:

To Do List:
- Finish the bunk bed (add sheets pillow and all that good stuff) ALMOST DONE
- Finish the curtains (give them depth by shading) DONE
- Do all the objects inside the room (books on shelves, computers, printer etc)  DONE
- Do a tiled carpet. (I actually need help on how to even start this) DONE
- "Interactivize" in flash. More on this below. DONE
Interactivization (sorry for the goofy word)
Basically I will make it animated from the beginning having all the objects and things falling from above to their rightfull spaces. Since some object are covered by others I will make it interactive in the sence that when you click an onject - it will be visible on a specially designed panel beside the room. 
I will also have something new and interesting that goes along with the whole "interactivization" in flash. But it's a secret right now.
I want to make this look the best it can using my own pixeling skills so any help (edits for the to study, critique for me read, yelling for things I did wrong) Be tough but helpfull on critiqing or be thoughtful and logical, whoever you decide to help me - I will appreciate it!  8)
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Thank you,

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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Topic: Room Project [Completed] Posted: 06 August 2005 at 1:57pm
	This is "THE Room" [s](Please keep in mind that is is still a WIP and is far from being done)[/s] CLICK HERE FOR THE FLASH ANIMATION OF THIS PROJECT!!! ________________________ These are the different objects in progress: To Do List: - Finish the bunk bed (add sheets pillow and all that good stuff) ALMOST DONE - Finish the curtains (give them depth by shading) DONE - Do all the objects inside the room (books on shelves, computers, printer etc) DONE - Do a tiled carpet. (I actually need help on how to even start this) DONE - "Interactivize" in flash. More on this below. DONE Interactivization (sorry for the goofy word) Basically I will make it animated from the beginning having all the objects and things falling from above to their rightfull spaces. Since some object are covered by others I will make it interactive in the sence that when you click an onject - it will be visible on a specially designed panel beside the room. I will also have something new and interesting that goes along with the whole "interactivization" in flash. But it's a secret right now. I want to make this look the best it can using my own pixeling skills so any help (edits for the to study, critique for me read, yelling for things I did wrong) Be tough but helpfull on critiqing or be thoughtful and logical, whoever you decide to help me - I will appreciate it! 8) ___________________________ Thank you, Edited by Zoomrix
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jegHegy Seaman Joined: 04 August 2005 Location: Hungary Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:11pm
	i love the chairs. :)
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:14pm
	Thank you. :) But I'm going to need much more feedback than that lol. But thanks anyway.
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:18pm
	I think it's starting to come together nicely. One thing I will point out is that you have everything outlined properly except for the legs of the desk and the chair cushions could use a darker one.
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 5:27pm
	Did you mean to say "darker tone"? Well in reality the chairs are even more lighter, kind of a light sandy color on the cushons. I tried to get as close to that as I could. And I'm not sure what you mean by the legs... do you mean the bottom of the table legs or just the whole thing in general? :S
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:00pm
	I think Pb meant the chair cushions need a darker 'one' meaning outline. And I'd say that the whole metal table legs part should have an outline to be consistent w/ everything else in the room. Not much feedback I can offer, looks like you've got everything down, just keep working on the things on your list ;) Edited by leel
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:34pm
	Leel : That's exactly what I meant/said
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 06 August 2005 at 6:49pm
	Oh ok. I"ll fix the table then. :) EDIT: I did my best to find that sandy color again and made it a big darker. I tested out the outlines with the legs of the table, it just doens't look good, I think they are fine now since they are so tiny already, an outline would either make them fat or too thin. I just wanted to check with you guys if you found anything wrong with it. I guess now I'm going to continue Edited by Zoomrix
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 28 August 2005 at 11:49am
	I hope it's okay to doulbe post if art/work is being updated because that's exactly what I'm doing. I have worked on the flash'ing of the project all day yesterday and pretty much have it all completed. I just have to replace the unfinished bed with the finished one... when I finish it CLICK HERE FOR THE FLASH ANIMATION OF THIS PROJECT!!!
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 28 August 2005 at 12:33pm
	nicely done dude but, why not have the image stay once it's completed falling down?
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 28 August 2005 at 12:37pm
	Well part of it because I want to have the credits. I didn't know how else to implement them into the movie... Any suggestions?
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