What? No penquin?

Edited by PandaPlanet

Cool! The way youve dithered in chunks like that reminds me of Quake 1 . First off, where's your lightsource, it looks like its from above and infront of the tank, but the left of the front face is darkened. The lines on your tracks aren't in perspective with the rest of the vehicle, they are in effect on the same plane as the line above the front star on the tank, see?
I think the problem is the track has no side edges on it. Tank tracks arent flat, well, what is? There are like rectangular prisms a little bit, if you have side faces on your tracks I think you will be able to more easily follow the curve.
Only other thing I would say is some of the lines are a little harsh, use either a closer tone to the fill colours, or AA it a bit.
Oh and also, looking at the reference pic, the bottom of your tank doesnt match the actual bottom, the one in there reference is lifted off the ground more, like a car.


Edited by EyeCraft

This gives me tons of inspiration Brian. This is such a great piece and it definately have "STYLE" written all over it even.

The only crit I would have is the on the left (our left) track it seems to kind of stick out. I think that is because you just traced it along with the wheel (not sure what the wheels are called on a tank ). So I think you can either draw in the other wheel and you won't have to do much with the outside lineart or you can just forget about that other wheel sticking out and just fix the track on our left.

Since a picture says 1000 words, I think two pictures will describe it better.

Yeah lol. But what I meant was really just to keep the left (our left) track consistent. It looks like it gets fatter to that point that I showed on the edit, and the right (our right) track doesn't seem to do that so it's not a view issue, just in the matter of following the scale.

Lol, that's exactly what I've critiqued on. I think it's because when he did the lineart, in the picture it's not as clear, but if you look closely - you can see that it's that wheel pointing out, but it blurs too much with the actual track so it looks as one whole but actually it's two separate things.

Yeah, since it's blurry on that other refrence you showed it looks as if it is part of the track. I think now you understood those 2000 words

Yup looks very good, Brian. Good job!

Very nice work so far :)
The tank on the back looks a kinda weird though... the shape of it looks too smooth.

Thank you both for your kind comments. 

THis is coming along nicely Brian. Your initial tank looks great.  Do you plan on having little penguin soldiers milling around?

The tank in the back is not the same thatnk that is on front. is it ment so?

 

Tank on the front has 3 different body blocks, tank on the back has 2.